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December 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
When are you continuing?? This is painfull
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July 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
If you really want to, maybe swap POV's every couple of chapters, not totally change to someone else. Eros is what you started out with, and unless you are switching POV to someone new or a character we have only met briefly, it wouldn't make much sense. I read a LOT and experienced authors don't usually switch POV's unless it is to tell a parallel story (like the different books within......the return of the king for example). Or they switched POV's from the beginning.
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June 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Maybe have this end and have Derek's POV. And if at all possible maybe have a happier ending for Eros maybe him no longer being a slave?
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June 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Maybe have this end and have Derek's POV. And if at all possible maybe have a happier ending for Eros maybe him no longer being a slave?
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June 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awesome new chapters! I'm really intrigued by Eros's shift and can't wait to read about how that goes, but I'd also be really interested in reading from Derek's POV. I want to know what he thinks of slaves (considering his first interaction with Eros) and because he's also closer to Jack and his wife, we could find out more about them and what they're intentions are. Whatever you go with I can't wait to read more.
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April 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story. Can't wait for more!
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April 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
grrrrrrrr if he accepts a replacement I want Derek dead...
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April 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Arrogant doctor!!! I wish I could kill him ... Replace him??? ohhhhh
I like Derek more and more in this new version of your story! This seems like a whole new story not resembling the old ones. I like this one better ^_^
Please update soon ;)
I like Derek more and more in this new version of your story! This seems like a whole new story not resembling the old ones. I like this one better ^_^
Please update soon ;)
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March 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
poor Eros :(
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March 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I thought Jack would be his friend and doesn't really think of him as a slave. I thought that Eros won't be rape after surviving two attacks. Derek is sweet though his attitude is confusing me sometimes. I was wondering what would Jack think if he learns what happened to Eros. Waiting for updates :)