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by ramblingrobin

schedule May 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Mick is so cute. Update soon!
person Karen
schedule May 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
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person jyanx
schedule May 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great story. One of my new favorites.
person clover max
schedule May 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is great. A psychic dentist and werewolves with re growing wisdom teeth. More please!!
schedule May 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chap.3
This story has already caught my interest. I love Nick's personality. PLEASE UPDATE SOON, I CANT WAIT TO READ WJAT HAPPENS NEXT!
person Celestialuna
schedule May 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Good start of story.
person Celestialuna
schedule May 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter.
person Celestialuna
schedule May 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, I love it. I love his sense of humor!!!
schedule May 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great story, following this on FP so I can get updates!
person ~~*N*~~
schedule May 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story -- I am so glad I found this! I love Nathanial/"Mick"...his inner monologue is adorable, and the way you described his abilities was beautiful and brought forth a wonderful mental image of something that I cannot imagine is easy to describe. It's also nice that he's not super in love with himself...a great deal of first-person pov stories end up with their protagonist sounding terribly narcissistic and self-involved, but you've avoided that perfectly, making "Mick" just lovable.
I'm also very fond of Guy, which I wasn't sure I would be when you first trotted him out...his demeanor makes loads more sense, now that it's clear that he's a wolf and some kind of bodyguard. (As a complete side note, I really enjoyed the surprise presence of werewolves in the story...I don't know why, but I was expecting "Mick's" gift to be the only supernatural element in the mix, and it was a nifty twist to see that I was wrong. Plus, I love werewolves, if they're done right. And I love the way you've described them so far.) He's extremely enjoyable, too, since you explored his personality a bit more and showed that he has a sense of humor. Plus, the way he pounced all over little Nathanial was just awesome.
I can't wait to see where you go with this. Please please please, keep writing!

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