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Looooooooooove this! Honestly I dont think you should change a thing, your doing an amazing job as is. The chapter endings seem totally fine to me. Cant wait for the next update, waiting on pins and needles.

I'm so sorry I really didn't see chappy 6.... But I'm all the more happy for a double update^^ I don't mind either way you handle your storys, you can leave the chappys short or make them longe whatever feels more comfotable to you^^ Anyway I really loved thise two chappys^^ I wonder why he kepps his shirt on... Can't wait for guy to find out the reason^^ That conversation will definitly be fun^^ And the one about his cutting.... So can't wait for the next update!!!! See you again soon!!!

I really liked the last chapter :) Regarding your question, I think you shouldn't limit yourself to a certain number of pages. It is better to go for a rounded chapter even if it takes longer to finish it because then the story won't be choppy and the continuity will be better.

OH HELL YEAH!!! I love the detail in him wanting to clean everything most wouldn't think of something like that. This story is a joy to read! read ya laters!

Go for longer chapters, they are worth the wait!

I love guy. His persistance will continue to pay off I'm guessing. As for how to break your chapters up personally I think you're breaking them up just fine for me. great job!

So I've never reviewed a story before on here, I am much more of a lurk in the shadows type of gal, but I fell so in love with this story that I can't seem to help myself. I think what hooks me is the main character's "voice". I love the witty and sarcastic humor of his inner monologues. I also very much enjoy that he is a dentist of all things! I have found myself checking and rechecking for updates for the past couple of weeks. Tis not healthy! I am waiting (sort of) patiently and (very) anxiously for another taste of Prophylaxis :)

I'm selfishly glad that there were two reviews that demanded another chapter and the meeting with Guy...not because I don't trust your pacing but because I'm spoiled and I love this story and I want more.
The details about Mick are wonderful...the ways that you have crafted for him to deal with his gift are amazing, especially the details and the specificity of why he does what he does. It makes the empathy more concrete, to see the problems that come with it and the ways that he has had to develop to deal with its lingering effects. Plus, his inner monologue is just adorable.
I also like this new side of Guy that you've given us...it's a nice contrast to his dark, brooding-ness, to see him uncertain and trying to ask Mick to prom (um...so to speak). And I love the idea of his work as a protector -- it gives him a great deal of dimension, and it's nice that he's more than just a pretty, angsty, and muscle-y wolf. But I'm also keen to see how he turns down Mick's attempts at brushing him off.
Thank you for this story. Please, please, please, pleez keep writing!

So I feel I should review since my first review was a complaint that was addressed. Thanks for that! :P

Much satisfied with this addition, I was never a fan of morphing pack werewolves, but these guys are fun with their wolf pack rules and what not. I like supernatural creatures having to follow some set of rules - dunno why. Guess otherwise I feel like you haven't explained why there was no hostel take over of earth by the obviously stronger species.

I am also a big fan of Guy's attitude and Mick's always jumping to the worst case scenario. (Though turning this suddenly into a gruesome hunt and destroy mission with Guy having been give permission to do so seems like a great spin off!)

Cheers!

yay :D
loving this story more and more :DDD
Hope you'll update regularly :D
Love the idea of an empath