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August 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is sooo great! I rarely come upon a fiction as interesting as this one! Great job! :D
Please update soon ^_^
PS: Is it going to be a bdsm later? :)
Please update soon ^_^
PS: Is it going to be a bdsm later? :)
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August 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Is it strange that I like this "I'm not your bitch" side of Nathan? Because I like that he just flat out threw Guy out once pissed enough. Also, I like the new format looks really nice!
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August 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Amazing! F*cking amazing! Powerful! Enthralling!
The detail and transitions are perfect. The characters are rich, strong and complete; great depth! The story is disturbing yet addictive. I kept wanting to reach out and hug Mick. He definitely needs Guy's strength, not because Mick is weak. No, because only someone like Guy could handle someone like Mick. Thank you for such a great read! I am looking forward to the continuing story. Great job sweety!! Keep it up! When you can, think about getting it published in book form or in a magazine.
The detail and transitions are perfect. The characters are rich, strong and complete; great depth! The story is disturbing yet addictive. I kept wanting to reach out and hug Mick. He definitely needs Guy's strength, not because Mick is weak. No, because only someone like Guy could handle someone like Mick. Thank you for such a great read! I am looking forward to the continuing story. Great job sweety!! Keep it up! When you can, think about getting it published in book form or in a magazine.
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August 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Talk about letting it all out, kinda feel sorry for Guy.
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August 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Poor Guy. Try not to be too hard on him, Nate :)
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August 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god that was so amazing!!!!! I just adore this story!!!! And I really hope we will see guy again!!! See you soon!!!
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August 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I can totally understand Nates anger at Guy, Nate must be beyond frustrated about people really not understanding his ability, how greatly it really affects his day to day life and not really having anyone to talk to about it. The things he has to do to stay sane would seem barbaric to others. You really nailed it!
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August 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I was actually put in a psychiatric hospital when I was like 14 for almost a month
and it sucked so I understand why Nate's so pissed off at Guy
and it sucked so I understand why Nate's so pissed off at Guy
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August 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just started reading this today, and I love it so far! I love the main characters, and the storyline is engaging. Things are getting pretty intense now, I can't wait to read more!
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August 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
yay a faster post ! : )