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for Enslaved

by ScarletAlexander

schedule November 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ah, a lovely story and I find myself wanting to read more of it! Keep up the wonderful work.
person Error
schedule November 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
personally I don't get why this story is getting so little reviews, it is absolutely amazing. Really like the characters and character/plot developments. Hope to see the next chapter soon!
person aninhas
schedule October 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hi :)
I usually don't review much but I just had to, since I love your story <3
Ilya seems like a really interesting character and I like the way Mercer and Ilya's relationship is developing (even though it appears they will soon be apart again :( booo!) lol
looking forward to read more updates from you :D
person aninhas
schedule October 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
p.s. don't know why but the rest of my review isn't appearing... lol anyway here's the rest:
Ilya seems like a really interesting character and I like the way Mercer and Ilya's relationship is developing (even though it appears they will soon be apart again :( booo!) lol
looking forward to read more updates from you :D
person afinemess
schedule October 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Very good story, can't stop reading now so please continue with the updates.
schedule August 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy this story :D I always look forward to your updates, the plot and characters are just so enjoyable and addicting lol XD Cant wait to read what happens next!
person SinfulMind
schedule May 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. The first summary put me off reading the fic, now it intrigued me. So here I am, telling you that the story has promise and may yet turn out beautifuly. I keep my fingers crossed!

I hope all the slaves will be returned to their home and that our little assassin will find some comfort in the Mercer's not so delicate hands ;)Ti;; next time!
person SunaoTsuji
schedule May 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1-9. Woot! This story is awesome. There's no rush in the way you wrote it and the characters have a real feel to them. You've put character into the characters that are in the story so far. I'm extremely pleased with this story and the effort you've put into writing it. I'm looking forward to the completion of this story as you post. Keep up the awesome writing!
person Anon
schedule May 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoying the start to this story. It looks very promising, like one of those you come to love so I hope you continue on with it for a long time :)
person midnightsscream
schedule May 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
huh, I wonder what Ilya will be up to next. There's a hit in your summary that makes it sound like he'll be stuck in slavery, but maybe I just misread. Can't wait to find out. great job