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for Your Mind Your Body Your Soul

by Vordi

person Spooky
schedule January 29, 2020 at 12:00 AM

I'd love to see where this story goes. So far, it's really good. I don't really know what to say in terms of encouragement, but even just with one chapter, it's already one of the better stories I've seen here. Keep it up, pleases? And I really appreciate your grammar, btw.

schedule January 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
WELL put me down as scared AND horny!
person Zibub
schedule November 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loved it - not at all what I anticipated when i began to read it!! Can't wait for more!!
person Anon
schedule October 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
uless i missed it does the main character have a name?
person C.J.
schedule October 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hey this is super interesting and I like the start so far! Really hope you still plan on continuing it!