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for Oblivion

by Windstryke

person CandyCoatedCyanide
schedule May 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Just started reading this story today and I'm in looooove. I'm very interested in how this is going to work or play out and I also wonder of his healer status is going to make a difference. Looking forward to the next chapter and good luck!
person reader1962
schedule May 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
ya another chapter : )
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule May 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ack, no, an evil cliffhanger of doom.

I loved the interaction between Rezule and Sheera, it was cute how they were teasing Shale in that way but without him present. Is Sheera like a mage or something and when she touched Rezule it caused that memory to come back to Rezule but she wasn't expecting it and that's why she screamed?! Is he magical or something? So, Rezule is a bastard and he might actually turn out to be of the Spirit Bear's tribe? His blood father must have been one of them and that would explain his blue eyes but his mother wasn't.

I hope they don't get angry with Rezule and that Sheera explains what happened and helps him by talking about it.

I love your fast updates and this story!
schedule May 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yet another chapter.. well done~ I think this story's pretty amazing so far!
person Anon
schedule May 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
the first chap does work a bit better now. : )
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule May 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I loved Shale's 'yoga' exercise in front of a very observant Rezule, LOL. I am so in love with these two characters. Anyhoo, what was with Rezule's teeth and eyes? It must be a defense mechanism of sorts.
schedule May 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love love love love love! I need more, lol.
person Karen
schedule May 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
ya another new chapter !
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule May 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed reading the part about the legend of the White Bear very much. I wonder what Shale will do when he finds out that Rezule is the enemy and was not just an innocent prisoner.
schedule May 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This story is at a great start! please update soon!!