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for Oblivion

by Windstryke

person moon1958
schedule September 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story! Really good cliffhanger!
schedule July 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just came across this story and I love it. I hope you update soon.
person Zara
schedule July 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!!!! UPDATE PLEASE!!
person Kat
schedule May 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Thanks for updating so regularly. The magical elements in this story are quite mysterious...
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule May 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gawd, I loved this smutty chapter very much indeed. I was like drooling when Shale was deep throating Rezule's well endowed cock, LOL. I too love all the names you have come up with for your characters and the world you have created for them.
person GreenEliza
schedule May 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
AAAAnd I'm already obsessed with this story. GREAT writing!!
person Ellie
schedule May 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Weeeee can't wait to hear shales's side of all this. You cant just suddenly mention that they were making out and just leave it at that!!!! Come onnnnn
person TRUgrit
schedule May 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love the dynamic right off the bat btwn Shale and Rezule. Totally diggin th names too. That's a really tricky part of writing. If ur names don't match th characters u kind f lose the illusion. Bt great job in writing. It's a very intriguing story so far and icant wait to read more!
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule May 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you wonderful author, updating so quickly after that cliffy you left us with. So, Rezule's a healer, very interesting twist. I was hoping Rezule's blood father wasn't the same man who beat him as a child after his beloved mother died but guess I was wrong. I really love Sheera and with her compassion she makes a great healer. I am hoping now that Commander Lark doesn't send Rezule away. I loved the scene when Sheera is watching Rezule and his mama then the part with the Spirit Bear was very emotional. Oh, oh, oh, oh, who initiated the kiss, Rezule? I bet Shale is enjoying it.
person TNels
schedule May 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this....:-)so good. I check everyday for new chapters, and read the story unfold. Really good!