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April 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Just now caught up with this story and I'm glad I gave it a shot! Are we ever going to know what exactly happened with Shale and that Nass guy in his tent? Why was he picked for the experiment anyway and not Lark? Will Rezule be able to heal him or is he destined for another? Will we ever find out if his Mom was raped or unfaithful to dad? Will we find out he is the white bear incarnate or just a fluke of nature? Well I guess I'll just have to read to find out huh? I look forward to it! read ya laters!
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April 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Good story, enjoying reading this. Love to see more.
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April 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Don't apologize for the lack of smut. You're telling a story! And the bit about the swords, excellent!
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March 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I've come to really care for Shale, Rezule and Sheera. I feel like I know them, broken and yet strong. One question, again, yes, I know ^_^. Sheera seems very accepting that Shale is back on the drug. But does she know why? What did Shale think Rezule knew when he thought Sheera had told the younger man everything.
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March 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!! It's so great and I can't wait to find out what happens next!
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March 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ok, Nass is a monster and needs to get treated like one. And I an only imagine what's going to happen when it comes to like what Shale did to get the horse. Have to say I disagree, not a boring chapter, but a building one. So now what?
Drugs, that made me cringe...definitely made me cringe. The fact that Nass had a syringe, make me wonder if I had gotten the development of your world wrong. I didn't think they were that advanced. Whoops. Cheers, read more next update!
Drugs, that made me cringe...definitely made me cringe. The fact that Nass had a syringe, make me wonder if I had gotten the development of your world wrong. I didn't think they were that advanced. Whoops. Cheers, read more next update!
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March 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Just found this story today, or found it again! Glad I did. Please keep updating. Really enjoying it.
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October 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! Please update soon. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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September 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
More please! Amazing story! But you are evil - left this on the cliff again... Can't wait to read more - you have spellbound me. ;)
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September 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Youre a great author! This story is jus awesome so far! Please keep writing it.
Update ASAP please!!!!
Update ASAP please!!!!