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for Oblivion

by Windstryke

schedule December 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was just about to get really interesting too...oh well, just have to wait with even more anticipation for the next one. Also, really looking forward to his next lesson with Gaudron...and finding out about Shale...and, oh bother, I guess just everything.

Good luck with your writing.
person Moku_Sui
schedule December 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
yay! Next chapter please! :D
person olga
schedule October 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow!What a brilliant captivating story. You should consider publishing it.right now though,I CANNOT wait to read the rest of the chapters.Thank you for such an enjoyable read.
person Rukia Isaioi
schedule October 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
O wow cool!!! I feel so happy 4 rezule!!! He's finally learnin in a good way!!! Plz explain mor of the wolves/wolf ppl nxt chaps, its a Lily odd if a loan wolf has responsibility 2 any unrelated kids, as normally a loner avoids contact & has no loyalty 2 an alpha- the flip bein that most alphas wouldn't trust a lone wolf w its yung... So??? And could u explain mor about wat the kids wer talkin about, as i got the impression 1 or mor was color-blind. Thanx & plz update soon!!!

Rukia
person Moku_Sui
schedule October 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
What's going to happennnnn???
person rukia isaioi
schedule October 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Sheesh!!! U scared me!!!!! I was so scared u wer gonna romeo&juliet this story i was about 2 giv it up,glad i decided 2 peek @ this chap!!! Now they just gotta find shale & FIX him!!! Will the poor guys EVER b able 2 relax?!?! I hope so!!!!! Plz PLZ PLZ update soon!!!!!

Rukia
person rukia isaioi
schedule October 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
GASP!!!!! No dont kill him!!! Plz update soon & save him!!! This story has 2 end better than 'he died relieved'!!! If he really dies i dont think I'll want 2 read anymor. I HATE tragedies.honestly it needs 2 b a genre & or a warning tag. Plz plz plz dont kill ur best character!!!

Rukia
person Anon
schedule October 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow if you hadn't given a disclaimer I would've finished the preparations for th ritual to send your soul to the lowest depths of hell.... As it stands great update! *sets the jar of unicorn tears back on the shelf & folds hands expectantly, waiting for the next chapter* you may proceed now :)
person Moku_Sui
schedule October 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OOOH MY GOD!!!!
person wolfluv
schedule May 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
WOW I'm soooo happy to see this back again! WHAT A CLIFFY!!! I can't wait to read what happens next! thank YOU for updating! read ya laters!