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for Fire and Ice

by 2rainsong2

schedule May 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So Zane and Casi are a bit more lovey dovey compared to your other pairings, well maybe Nick and Peyton were more lovey dovey, but still... I like Casi. I have no troubled with a dominant submissive, I like it how he is the do-it-don't-think type of guy contra anti-hero type. Zane is, as I've said before, not your usual type of dom. He is softer than the others. Mostly it have been the dominants who have brought the story forward (now don't get me wrong, I love the subs too, but the doms have had that special little thing which made us girls squeal), but in this case I must say it is Casi who rules the story.
person Misakixusagi
schedule May 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great few chapters, even thought zane had a dominant moment, i kinda prefer him as the submissive lol, casi has this thing about him that just screams dominant ^__^
Looking forward to tomorras update n see if casi gets his dom state if mind back ;) hehe

Love ya x BB
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule May 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am relieved all their secrets are out in the open now. I hope Yvette and Angelo kick it off because she deserves someone special in her life. I think Zane has found a new family that he's now part of.
person CelticThunderFan
schedule May 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I too agree with other reviewers about Zane and Casi dominant and submissive sides. It's actually kind of refreshing that they are so different from Dante and Blaine, Kirk and Malcolm, and of course our Tom and Andrew. I like that Casi is more dominant even though he's also a sub. ~ Katie ~
person Jessie
schedule May 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I wish we had a Abuela Juanita in our family but sadly both my grandmother's passed away. I am glad that Yvette might find happiness with Miguel and love Casi for thinking of her in that way by introducing them. Zane is so cute with how easily he blushes and it's hard to believe he's a Dom.
schedule May 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wait, didn't Casi tell Antonio that most of the merchandise is still on the truck? Antonio doesn't even know what's missing, so where did he come up with 45 grand? And how the hell is Casi gonna get his hands on that type of money?

This was an exciting nail-biting chapter! :)
schedule May 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well why would Zane hit on all the men at the fire department now that he is out if he hadn't previously? Kenny's reaction was more realistic. It does take time for many to accept the fact that someone they've known for a long time suddenly comes out as gay, but I think he is someone who eventually will come around pretty quickly.
I like Abuela, she's cool :) she is such a sweet lady but I bet you would not want to make her angry. I'm glad she could help Casi with the money, otherwise he would be in some real deep shit.
person CelticThunderFan
schedule May 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I was thinking that it was rather dangerous on the part of Antonio to have Dante at this meeting and only Nick as protection because what would have happened if Casi had brought more men (wanting to take over their turf) and they attacked then both Antonio and Dante would have been killed. It was kind of an oversight on their part because it could have turned out bad. If something happened to both of them, it would be over.

I just love Casi's Abuela and the fact that she is trusting him enough to give it to him as a loan expecting him to pay it back. I am sure he will and with interest.

I think Zane's fellow brothers took his being gay rather well considering it could have gone done worse for him.

~~ Katie ~~
person Misakixusagi
schedule May 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
As always,a awesome chapter :) n i like the idea of being BB ;) ^_^
schedule May 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh la la la... Zane finally showed some dominance there xD it was about time. Casi is a naughty little boy in need of a strong man to dominate him. Okay... I'll spare you from my dirty mind. Looking forward to your next update :)