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June 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I forgot to ask - I think about this story a lot: what about "Imprisoned"? Will you be finishing it?
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June 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You simply MUST write about G's first training, even if just a one-shot...a LONNNNNNNNNNG one-shot!
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June 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Alright, I am losing it, and just left a review for Fire and Ice under a story called Blood Red that I am reading too, LOL. I am so embarrassed.
Oooh, revenge is sweet, and Guillermo I going to wish he never took that hit out on Casi, LOL. I am glad Casi didn't want Zane to turn into a cold blooded killer.
Oooh, revenge is sweet, and Guillermo I going to wish he never took that hit out on Casi, LOL. I am glad Casi didn't want Zane to turn into a cold blooded killer.
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June 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Stinking Mr. M. too? He helped Casi, he was there for him. How could he do that? What a knife in the back.
Casi came up with a great plan though. lol
Casi came up with a great plan though. lol
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June 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo love my boys zane n casi :)
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June 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 27: damn, I missed this update.
I remember Radar! He was so funny and kinda cute. :) Forgot the actor's real name though... I can see the guy in my mind. lol
Anyway...this Radar certainly is deadlier than the Radar in M*A*S*H. Of course M*A*S*H's Radar wasn't deadly at all.
So, who's holding Mr. Martinez hostage if Radar is in Idaho?
I am confused; all your twists and turns have my mind reeling. lol
Ok, on to chapter 28. :)
I remember Radar! He was so funny and kinda cute. :) Forgot the actor's real name though... I can see the guy in my mind. lol
Anyway...this Radar certainly is deadlier than the Radar in M*A*S*H. Of course M*A*S*H's Radar wasn't deadly at all.
So, who's holding Mr. Martinez hostage if Radar is in Idaho?
I am confused; all your twists and turns have my mind reeling. lol
Ok, on to chapter 28. :)
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June 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Are you friggen' kidding me? His own friend, the one he send money to all the time, hired Radar? Oh shit, indirectly, it was probably Casi's money that Guillarmo (did I spell that right?) was using! Omg.
Hopefully Radar will die which will prolong Guillarmo from hiring someone else. But why the hell would Guillarmo want Casi dead? What does he gain from that?
Anxiously awaiting the next installment...
Hopefully Radar will die which will prolong Guillarmo from hiring someone else. But why the hell would Guillarmo want Casi dead? What does he gain from that?
Anxiously awaiting the next installment...
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June 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh Rain, I forgot to add this in my review: in ch. 27 where you introduce Radar, you wrote pee on. I think you meant peon. :)
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June 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thought it was time to post again lol kinda forget seeing as i talk to my girlie everyday hehe ^_^
I had a wtf moment wen reading this i tell ya lol, but as always im loving the suspence and the story in general, n not just because i beta lol, looking forward to casi gettin zane in the slave master role day trip :) haha even though im not always a fan of that stuff,im happy is it ties in nice with a story lol
Keep it up missy
I had a wtf moment wen reading this i tell ya lol, but as always im loving the suspence and the story in general, n not just because i beta lol, looking forward to casi gettin zane in the slave master role day trip :) haha even though im not always a fan of that stuff,im happy is it ties in nice with a story lol
Keep it up missy
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June 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Zane better keep his beast in it's cage or Casi is going to have to punish him, LOL. I wonder who this Radar is working for and am dying to find out. Great entertaining chapter, as usual. Read you at next update, Katie.