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for Fire and Ice

by 2rainsong2

person CelticThunderFan
schedule April 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am relieved that Casi isn't the arsonist but this Guillermo person is and he's apparently protecting him. I like Casi's somewhat wacky family. I hope Zane tells Casi he hasn't come out yet before his secret is let out of the bag in the wrong way. ~~ Katie ~~
person dazedandconfused
schedule April 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am seriously going crazy over Zane and Casi but nervous too because of what Casi is involved with that Zane doesn't know about.
person Kantiss Everdeen
schedule April 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, I can't wait to see what Zane meant when he asked Casi if he liked to dance. I can just picture them both dancing naked under the moonlight on the roof all alone with just the night sky and stars above them.
schedule April 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Uh uh... seems to me that Zane is on the edge of obsession with the mystery man/boy. Since it is only the first chapter I usually don't have an opinion about the story yet, but based on from what I've read of your work I have high hopes.
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule April 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I've been waiting for your new story and here it is. I know you needed a day or two of rest, LOL. It wasn't quite what I was expecting BUT I am very interested to see where it leads us. I like Zane but hope this mystery guy isn't the one starting fires. Firemen risk their lives everyday and many have died in the line of duty saving others so I hope this Latino kid isn't setting them for some reason. If he is, I don't think I will ever like him. I am anxious to see how this goes so will be sticking around until the end because I know you never disappoint me.
person CelticThunderFan
schedule April 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like this new story of yours already, go figure. I sense that Zane is going to be different from the other men in your stories and can't wait to learn more about his special little quirks. I can't believe he let his friend, Yvette, talk him into going hunting for this mystery man who wears a trench coat and smokes cigarettes. So, a firefighter and a pyromaniac? If that's the case, this should prove to be an interesting new relationship. ~Katie ~
person Misakixusagi
schedule April 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Woooooooo go you ^_____^
person Jess
schedule April 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Sounds like this is going to be good! I love your work so I can't wait for more!!!
person dazedandconfused
schedule April 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
WTG! I think you have another bestseller in the works. I am loving it already and think the title you came up with for it is cool too. I am excited about getting to know more about Zane and all of the other new characters we have yet to be introduced to. Awesome start!
schedule April 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
First off, I have heard a lot about your stories from a friend of mine. In fact, my entire office is going crazy reading your work so I finally got the balls to review one of your stories. I don't know how spicy this will get but I am already on the verge of jumping this mans bones from here to Jersey, baby! Let the games begin RAWR! Love it girl ;)