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for Fire and Ice

by 2rainsong2

person CelticThunderFan
schedule May 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, Zane is getting really brave by kissing Casi in front of his friends and fellow firefighters. I am getting excited for him to meet my favorite Carrillo gang. ~ Katie ~
person Jessie
schedule May 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really love this new story and the face that Casi is a strong 'sub' and Zane is very different and not your typical strong dominant type. I feel bad that Casi is worrying he might not make it out alive at the meeting but we know he will. I suppose that doesn't help what he's thinking though, LOL.
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule May 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed the talk that Casi had with his Abuela, very sweet and heartwarming. I hope he lets Zane know what's going on especially now that Zane kissed him right in full view of his co-workers. I know he would go with Casi to his meeting with the Carrillo brotherhood.
person dazedandconfused
schedule May 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, didn't Zane take a chance kissing Casi in front of Kenny and Wes like that?! I guess they probably already kind of sense that Zane is gay and was just waiting for him to be comfortable with himself to come out to them and he finally did! Please let Zane go with Casi for he meeting. I think Casi really believes he's going to his death sentence.

I had to take my 10 year old terrier mix to the vet's today because she's been limping and favoring her left rear leg. It's a torn ligament and she might have to have surgery to fix it! I am so nervous about it. She was so scared that she kept piddling and yelping everytime the vet moved her leg! She's such a big baby and I hate putting her through surgery at her age. I don't know what to do. She doesn't seem to be in pain and is eating and alert. If I disappear for while that's why.
schedule May 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am really excited about Casi's meeting with the Carrillos, wonder which one he will meet; Antonio or Dante (or possibly Nick). I like Casi, it's nice to see a dominant sub for a change. I actually like him more than Zane. Zane is a bit... too soft for my taste (no offence about that, I guess I'm just too used to Dante, Kirk and, heaven forbid, Tom). And I like Yvette too :) I just finished reading the Fifty Shades of Grey-trilogy and I am STARVING for strong females. Yvette also kind of reminds of Selena from Cabin Fever. It's good to see a story (despite the main characters being males) with women who actually have backbones and their own personalities.
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule May 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh crap, I've tried leaving a review like three times but it never submits or disappears entirely so here we go again.

I think that Casi is making a big mistake for not trusting Zane enough to reveal his secret 'identity?' to him. I know it will eventually come out and when it does Zane is not going to be happy especially if he finds out about it the wrong way.

Oh, and you don't mess with the Carillo family like that or there will be hell to pay.

I can't wait to see who appears and what happens. I just don't want Dante or Antonio hurt or Nick either.
person TRUgrit
schedule May 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!! I am sh*****g a brick! U sir r a f*****g genius. I love that th Carillos are coming bck in! I heart Dante & Blaine and the whole gang. Ur connections r freaking amazing. I am totally buggin (lol watched Clueless th other day) and I'm hoping tht it's all copacetic btwn th two groups. I love also that ur dabbling w a dom bottom. So many many things I love and I'm sure u don't wanna hear my gush like some ditz so let me just say super psyched about the new story.
person HideAndGoSeek
schedule May 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading this and was like oh man this is so good! I can't wait to read more! Then I saw who the author was and was like well duh... Everything this person wires is good haha. I even rolled my eyes at myself lol. Anywho! I really like this story so far too and the cliff hanger you left us with is gunna kill me until I get another update so please update soon! I know you usually update fast and I love you for it. Can't wait to see what happens!!!
person dazedandconfused
schedule May 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh gawd, Casimiro and Zane, you Wild thing, you make my heart sing.......... I don't know why but that song came to my mind when they were having sex, LOL.
schedule May 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I couldn't help but notice that Casi is a lot like Peyton from Better Then Boot Camp. They share the same similar aura of innocence (though I doubt Casi is the most innocent person one could find) yet they are two very, very naughty boys.
And don't worry, I do have faith in you :) that's why I got really happy when I saw that you had updated and had to read and review it, despite a major hangover xD