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April 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This is an excellent start to what must be a much longer tale. You've developed good characters with both virtues and flaws and an interesting literary universe for them to act in. Please do continue.
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April 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed the start to this story.I can tell the flow will pick up more as your characters grow.I hope you update fairly regularly!