rate_review Reviews

I thought that this story was very well written. As a person who had seen the aftermath of child slavery, whether you know this or not, this shit actually happens rigt here in the good 'ol USA. I have seen the devastation that these types of men cause to little boys and girls. As for the people who think you're "sick" or writing this story. STOP HATING and help bring these children home, or help get them out of these situations.... Become proactive!!!!

this story is great, has a lot of potential. i hope you keep writing!

Oh! I had forgotten this one! Its awesome! Somethings up with chapter 4 though. It didnt upload properly.


If you dont read warnings you shouldnt complain about the content of the story... idiot.