rate_review Reviews

Basically how to discipline your daughter. Love the story

Any chance that there will be more of this story? I've seen few other stories that have the kind of deeply satisfying depravity that this one has. Daddy is a sick, evil son of a bitch, and I SO want to be him. :)

This is good, twisted fun. The "voice" of the twin narrators seems realistic--I like their half-naive, half-worldly understanding of what is going on. I also like that you switched the narrative from one twin to the other to show how each one perceives his status in Daddy's eyes. And your editing is excellent; I saw no errors whatsoever in spelling or punctuation, and the few minor grammatical mistakes I noticed seemed to be meant to make the narrator's and the other characters' voices sound more genuine. Oh, and just in case I sound like I'm over-intellectualizing, I should mention that the story got me off big time. :)

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In any case, if you're planning to write more of this story, I look forward to reading it.

super hot. I can just picture him fucking the younger one and holding her up by the arms. you had me cumming even before the chapter ended. hope we get more soon!

this was fucking hot. really loved the part where she was trying to take her dads dick out. great story

not enough detail on the rape but love that he got her preggers. ive jerked off twice today thanks to this story.

I prefer girls but this was still sexy love that he drilled his kid's ass like that. keep it up. this is great.

really hot chapter. too bad the twins aren't older but I keep getting off picturing them raping her. hot story.

wish this had been longer but it still got me hard. I love that he rapes her so much. are the boys going to get fucked again next?

Um... Lara? Why are you reading this if you find it disgusting. In fact, why did you even open the story. I'm pretty sure the Minor1 tag that goes along with the summary is hint enough it's going to involve minors. For you to even click on this says a lot about how you're enticed to take a peek. That doesn't give you the right to say it's disgusting because how can you call yourself for even wanting to take a look? If you'll claim you didn't read or take a peek, how else will you find out what this story is about. LOL. People like you are just hard to understand.