rate_review Reviews

I like this chapter much better. I enjoy the story much more too now that I don't feel like someone only handed me half of the pages of a book. The writing isn't as... flourished (?? not the word I want but the only one coming to mind) in this chapter as it was in the last but it's much easier to comprehend.

LOOOOOOVEEEE IT! I'd love to read more :)It's so mysterious and I'm wondering what will happen next! Me thinks the master will be none pleased >_< Better watch out nappers! Anyway I really do hope that the Master will be saving him cause I don't want Percy to be separated from him :( that would be sooooo sad!! Keep up the great story! I'll definitely be lurking ;)