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Got excited when I saw this thought it was new chapter. I do remember getting confused reading the other version though but I do like this story so please continue I do want to find out what happens.

you mean method to your madness? XD hamlet is kinda emo...i hope percy isn't the same.
poor percy is so emo T_T

or maybe percy can pretend to be psychotic and extract revenge on people. in wonder what percy's will to live is now that his baby girls are gone. he's got like, no purpose in life now. lol

The quote from Hamlet is "Though this be madness, yet there is method in't." but people re-write the expression to variations of "There's a method in his/her/my madness"

Anyway lol revenge. XD so percy plots revenge? i don't think i particularly care for any of the characters so if any of them die it would be pretty interesting.

i thought it was funny how because Trent tells the truth and it hurts Percy, percy wants to kill trent XD That is so cute.

awwww poor percy T_T that was unexpected, but i liked it.

i hope they go to a good home. they weren't annoying characters either. i bet percy will be full of hate now that his treasures are taken away.

Ch10: It makes sense (what pieces of information we could fit together, that is). if it's confusing it's because there are scenes and scenarios that we're not being given the whole picture of...like what are those voices speaking that the rapist vamp heard. During the second transition at " Two women touched his shoulders as the red haired man's head dropped and he stifled another sob." I was only confused a bit what was going on because I did not connect "the redhead" to Kalen since Kalen is a forgettable pawn in the story. At first I thought it was the rapist vamp even. but i think I get what's going on. If you're concerned about people not understanding maybe it means you should give us clearer information (e.g. names) rather than only using descriptions to bring in new mysterious characters.

ch 11: omg that "hashtin" creature thing is so creepy T_T It's description is really good. I liked that part the most.

overall i wasn't confused by the chapter. although (maybe i missed it) i was curious why so many vamps wanted to kill what they thought was a dreamer.

anyway adjo must be pretty pissed he has a new group of things to take care of XD. especially when he learns about the new child on the way. haha. awesome chapter, i enjoyed reading it.

This story is so confusing and intriguing and I hope they continue to live as one big happy family. I love a good possessive dominant character, keep up the good work!

I enjoyed the story so far :)
a uh...'thing' that devours vamps the way vamps devour humans is pretty cool!

It's a good start. I'm eager for more. :)

Oh this was fabulous! Your melding your creative language and adjusting it for us to understand and enjoy. Good direction. And I'm wondering who this unnamed person was that reminded Percy of home. The part of him and Penny together knowing they were only pretending... so sad and bittersweet. The slow revelations are enticing. I swear for a second I could taste something sweet and hypnotic as the one fed off the other. The differences between the two lovers is captivating. This story has me hooked!