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Yay!!! Update!! \(^_^)/ Thank you so much!. I love the relationship of Telli with Crowley, the I hate you/I love you/ You`re all that I have thing... not to mention Luzi! I hope you continue this beautiful and exciting story. Greetings from your follower from Argentina ... :P

Oh my god this chappy was absoloutly fantastic!!!!! I really liked how crowly cares for his son and nearly dies for him and then finally luzi confesses his feelings^^That was so sweet!!!! I adored this chappy!!! And I really have to reread this tomorow now I'm to tired cause its already 2am at my place^^ Hope you vacation was nice and see you soon!!!!

The first part of this new chapter was really good. The ending was really confusing because it appears to have dropped some important dialog. I think the italics may have thrown the formatting off.

Love your story and every new secret that is revealed. At the end of the chapter there is a section that is completely missing the dialog.

Jaj Lockke is back^^I'm really sad that he was hurting but I hope he will be better now^^And the encounter with the shadow person was really not what I expected^^I like them^^Hope that the discussion with crowly will not be to agressiv^^ Hope to see you soon and I wish you a great vacation in ireland^^

Oh.My.God.

Your story is magnificent! I can not get enough. The way that you write, the way you explaing feelings and worlds, the way your characters behave, the way they speak. I am hypnotized! I really have no critisism for you, whether that makes me less deep of a person or not. I think your intelligence really shines in your story and the way that you write. It would really bother me if you chose to discontinue writing.

I am now a loyal reader to you!

Really good! I think your take on hell and demons is far more unique than what Ive read in the past. You give just enough information one piece at a time in order not to overwhelm your reader and I can appreciate that instead of dumping an entire world and species at me all at once like many do. I also think you've done a great job establishing your main character as an antihero, at this point your character could go either way. He could break or overcome. Of course this would be a really short and bloody story if he broke, soooo its safe to say thats not where your going with this. I look forward to reading more!

What a sad chapter.(sniff sniff) No place in the world to go, no friends, no love, no one to trust. I want to wrap my arms around him but then I'd probably be dead. lol. Can you give the kid a break? like a friend to trust? Now I've gotta go find a HEA romance to read. excellent story. Can't wait to see where you're taking this.

Oh that was amazing!!!! I really hope locke will come back^^ I adore him^^And he is part shadow people I really did't expect that^^I wonder what will happen next^^See you!!!

Thanks for the come back!!! BUT DAMN!!!! this page was just "OH HOLLY COW" and the plot thickens!!! I am totally a HUGE FANGIRL right now!!! Your story is just soooooo.... NEW in a great sort of way kinda sci-fi witchy uber hellish "FUN" that's how I'm going to discribe your story! Looking forward to see thing one all the way through!!! read ya laters!!!!