I absolutely ADORE this story! I don't know how you could possibly get bad reviews for it. There are a few minor typing whoopsies, but jeez the stories here are free. I'm assuming you don't have a professional editor on hand. Also, I'm pretty sure I saw you comment several times that there might be minor errors. There was no mistake that really detracted from the story. The characters came through beautifully, the story is well-paced, the world is fascinating and well thought out, and the sex is soooooo damn hot. Yum. I could reread your smutty scenes over and over. In fact, I'm putting this story on my recommended reading list so I'll be sure to find it when I do want to read the story again. I'm enjoying it thoroughly. I eagerly await the next chapter. Wonderful job. Xoxo Robin
I've been reading this on and off while at work, which was no easy feat. I was very intrigued from the beginning. Though it was a bit confusing at first, everything started clearing up the further and further I read. Moments that I enjoyed the most were: His first meeting with his mom and her sneaky way of trying to get back at his dad, how his father progressively became more and more vulnerable as he kept trying to make him stronger, his being dependent on Locke and in love with Luzi, the dialogue with the child to whom he reveals his full name, and of course the eventual mating of both Luzizi and Locke. I'm curious to see what he'll do with the summoning circles and how, exactly, he plans to destroy the world of the shadow people. Overall, it's been a very good read from start to chapter 12. I would very much like to read it to the end. Thanks for sharing.
I can't belive you are back!!!! You made me so happy to post a chapter again!!! I'm sorry my review is so late but I wanted to read the whole story again before reading the new chapters!!!! I really really like this story and all of your storys to be precise^^ I reread them a lot of times in the time you didn't update!!!! So now on to the real review:
So the new chapters were amazing!!! I really loved the mating part but it was sad that Crowly had to die, I would have wished for him to live although he was prepared for death. And I'm glad for the threesome solution you found for Locke, Luzi and Telli I'm glad you found a way for all of them to be happy!!!! I only hope that Telli wont really die in the end because that would make Luzi and Locke so sad!!!! Although it would be nice for Telli to get really hurt so that Luzi and Locke can heal him up to full health *evil leer* :) So I'm sitting on pins and needles here to wait and see what will happen next!!! Hope you will not let us wait again for 3 years!!!
And I just need to ask if you will contiune writing your other storys? Not only the ones posted here on AFF but also the ones on your hompage like Change and Bound by Blood but also Enemy of my Enemy!!!! Those are my favorites but I love all your other original storys too!!!! Are you going to update your homepage too? If so I'd keep an eye on it too, at the moment it doesn't look like it!!! Otherwise I will keep an eye open on AFF for sure!!! Hope you keep writing and see you again soon!!!
Yours faithfully smint45