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I do hope you continue this story I've really been enjoying it. I'm looking forward to seeing how the 'homecoming' is handled.

From your words, I presume Veronica has a long way of suffering, I hope that someday she will acomplish that. It is Not Easy for her, because they only need her for the healing und not because they want her. As a Fan, I would like her to become indepedent and mature inside, so how the Titel is, Like a Star that will shine on her own. I mean, a New world, Friends to make, so much opportunity. If the two don't give her a Chance and ignore her, i wish she will make her way alone and has many adventures, so maybe they will regret and follow her with jealousy when others beginn to desire her. I would not like for her only to suffer, Sorry, my english is not so Good. I Love Scy-Fiction and when you add a Woman and two Aliens, much better. I am waiting for your Update, Thank you!!!!!

I liked it very much, I hope she will be able to change both and their cast system. Maybe the two Aliens will someday fall in love with her und not only use Veronica anymore. Can I ask you when you update ? Once a month or a week ? However, please continue and update soon.

There is no way to make this or them sympathetic. It should be enough to execute them

Poor Veronica ! What's going to happen to her now ? T.T
To be forced to live with those two !!
They obviously love each other and there is no place for her...

I was a litle dissapointed in the length of your chapter in comparison to your others. I was not able to connect emotionally in this chapter with Veronica. Though I do agree the rape is horrible, we did not get to see her recovery through the month she was in the infirmary. Her point of veiw came back and she was all practically healed (aside from emotionally). Only a small portion of her pain of being a victim was captured.

I eagerly await the next chapter and all three partners responses to one another.

Happy writing!

It will be really interesting to see how she gets along with her partners. I am curious though, what exactly did the humans think they would be doing when they came to the planet? Did they know anything about the partnerships? Great update, I'm looking forward to reading more!

Exciting story.I like how she reactsto her new environment,seems realistic. Can't wait to see who she'sgetting shackeled to;)

I was so sad when I got to the fourth chapter, because I knew I would have to wait for another chapter. I think you have the perfect amount of detail, too much detail and my ADD kicks in ( What do I feel like eating? ) you accurately portray how a lower middle class citizen thinks and behaves, you have added the perfect amount of humor to add to the fear and confusion of this story. IM glad it doesn't feel super rapey, even though she is forced to be apart of a threesome ( Love it!). I would love it if you gave more examples of what Veronica is learning through conversation. You've done excellently so far, but the caste system you've described I'd like to understand better.

I do enjoy also how you allow the reader to use their imagination with what each character looks like.
That allows me to fall in love with what I think the character looks like. I read because I've got an imagination, otherwise I would watch television.

Anyway, I enjoy your writing, imagination, and political thoughts. Please don't leave me hanging with a beautifully half written story!

I was waiting for this second chapter. :))
You don't do a description of the aliens. They have four arms you said but that's all...
If nobody ever saw them, Veronica first impression is very important.
Can't wait for next month and the update ! ^^