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for Rising Star

by MahouMakai

person impressed
schedule September 25, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I just found just story today and I devoured every chapter. Its a very captivating story and I am curious to see what is in store in the future. Specially curious to see what ability she now possesses. Keep it up! I really like it so far!

person Websy
schedule May 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Love the story! Will there be any updates? Thanks! :)
person jess
schedule July 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
They can travel great distances, are technologically advanced but can't seem to do with raping a human being? No thank you.
person Wepber
schedule June 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Updates pretty please?
person Randis
schedule October 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the update!! Do hope that there is a happy ending for poor Veronica! Looking forward for more chapters
person KC
schedule September 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I was just revisiting some stories I have been following and came across this one. I hope your life is going well and you have not given up on this story. I really hope you are still working on this story as it seems very incomplete and I really, really want to know how life improves for Veronica. While I do not see her "coming to love" her bondmates any time soon... I do hope you plan to have her find a place of "peace" within her new life.
person KC
schedule July 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see you posted another chapter. Hope you life has settled down some and you get to have time to do things you enjoy, even if that is not writing and posting many more chapters on this story. I look forward to reading more chapters and seeing on how poor Veronica adapts to her new life. Currently I wish to see her ignore her Bondmates as much as possible... It might do them some good to be snubbed, unfortunately I don't think they would get it anyway.
person Franz
schedule July 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Finally you updated. Thank you very much !!! I only can say, they both are horrible aliens. They raped her and are so arrogant, they so not deserve her. I hope she will turn into a great personality and be free from them, maybe like a Captain Kirk. I am waiting for more......
person miles
schedule July 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad to see this story isn't dead ! :)
Just like I said there is no place for her... And they're very rude...
I can't imagine what's going to be her life now... :(
person Randis
schedule June 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Have been following your story since the start! Would very much love updates! <3