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for Mr. McFancypants

by Laevi

schedule March 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You can't stop now, that's just unfair! I knew there would be a twist to this story.
schedule March 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Nope, no twist yet, but I love the way Trigger disects and destroys all Cecil's reasons for going back to New York. Still wondering about the warnings, though.
person 2rainsong2
schedule March 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow! omg wow! That was uber hot! Too early in the morning for that kind of hotness but I am NOT complaining! LOL On to 4!
schedule March 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Come on, Cecil, make the right decision! Such a lovely story so far, I hope he doesn't just leave and that's it.
person 2rainsong2
schedule March 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
4 and 5 ahhh so hot then so sweet! I will cry my eyes out if Cecil leaves him for good. You wouldn't do that to us would you??? It sounds like he is just as lonely as Trigger and they made such a fast intense connection they are meant for each other! On to 6
schedule March 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Finished chapter 14 and part 1 which leaves me hoping for a part 2. I really enjoyed the story and sort of fell in love with Cecil. I thought it was well written and just the right amount of storyline and hotness to balance out. A lovely read for a Monday morning, thank you for sharing this!
person 2rainsong2
schedule March 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ah they love each other!! Cecil get off your but and move in with the man for good! You know you want to! Trigger is trying so hard to be strong about it but he wants him there so bad! This is such a sweet story! I am totally in love with these characters! On to 8!
person 2rainsong2
schedule March 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Behold the master! Wow just finished 11 and DAMN!!! That was so hot I need to go sit in the snow for awhile! Not good for someone sick but I'll take my chances! LOL On to 12 and BRAVO loving this story!!!!
person 2rainsong2
schedule March 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was AWESOME! Loved loved it! Damon and Jack are almost as sexy together already as Cecil and Trigger! Wonderful story, really! Sexy, great plot, great characters! Another winner! Thanks sooo much for posting and I cannot WAIT for part 2!
person Anon
schedule March 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Awww happy snuggly story I love it! Great job.