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for Mr. McFancypants

by Laevi

schedule February 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I just found your stories and now I have to read them all because I love the fuzzy-happy-innocence of this one! You write very well for a non native English speaker. The only problem is that now I'll be too busy reading to get anything done on my own stuff. Well done you!
person Jamie
schedule June 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
my god i cant wait for part 2, loved it
person m_kren2
schedule April 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
love it more please
person Celestialuna
schedule March 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
WOW! awesome story, very impressed. You are a very good writer.
schedule March 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
More of this, please! I'm intrigued! I need to know what happens next!
schedule March 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant, chapter 2 already! I love Trigger's simple mindedness and Cecil's obliviousness. Still loving this!
schedule March 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hot, hot. hot. Hurrah for the holidays, because I get to read this. More please!
person 2rainsong2
schedule March 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You got it to work for you YAY! I just finished cahp 1 and I giggled my butt off! Trigger is too cute and Mr McFancypants too! Way out of his element he will have to depend on Trigger for everything! Should make for interesting interaction! On to Chapter 2!
schedule March 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4 and still such a sweet love story. But what's with the warnings? Is trouble on the way for the lovebirds? I love the way you write, by the way.
person 2rainsong2
schedule March 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Don't know why I have to type in my username, I'm signed in. AFF might be glitching still so I'm glad it let you upload! Anyway so Trigger was mama's boy who is a virgin huh? Wow Cecil may just rock the heck out of his comfortable little world he has got around him! I am very anxious to see how Cecil is going to react when he sees he is in Trigger's bed, almost naked WITH Trigger! Here we go to 3!