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by Selah-Seftali

schedule October 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I cannot begin to tell you what a fantastic story this is. I just finished the third chapter. I am so captivated by this story that I'm sitting here reading it on my phone b/c my kid has my computer. I never review ony phone b/c it's a pain in the ass but I just had to let you know that Ia. Just addicted to this story!

I can't believe that Tango Man is Ian!!!!

I really like Christian though & I think he & Ian are good together.

Ok on to ch. 4. ;)
person Chibikodo
schedule October 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Definitely enjoying the flashbacks interspersed with the current time. Christian's party sounds pretty awesome. And Will's ex was definitely on to something. Like now- is he really admiring Ian and Christian's relationship.. Or is he jealous?
schedule October 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
"This is my husband Will." Priceless! Holy shit! Lol

And scheming June! She was funny!

Did I tell you how much I love this story?

Ok on to the next chapter.
person Ein
schedule October 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This story hits close to home. Glad you updated. Loving this story. Keep the updates coming. =)
person Reena
schedule October 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh man do these kind of parties actually happen,I mean the whole party sounds spectacular.I wish I could just read now about how they fell apart and what caused it but I know I just have to be patient.And as far as about the predictability of the story goes let me assure you just keep going the way you are because I'm totally digging in Will and Ian's reunion and the moments when they are back to their old selves with each other, as if they are not legally married and were never apart for 11 yrs.Your story already holds a very special place in my heart and seriously i checked for updates from you everyday.Thanks to you I'll enjoy this ride till it lasts but i hope it reaches it's destination and we readers get to see it with you;))lots of love tc.
person Chibikodo
schedule October 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm on the fence as to whether Will is realizing he can't have it all... Remembering his college days when he used to be more outgoing, carefree and missing it because he's really settling with his fiancee because that's what is expected of him. Of course, who knows what's going through his mind. Not sure I like Ian's beau.

Quite happy that you didn't decide to scrap this story. :)
schedule October 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just found this gem of a story! Chapter one was hysterical! Will and Ian are some pair! They are very humorous together! I feel so sad that Will is moving so far away from Ian. From the way they act and they talk to each other, I thought they had been best friends since childhood.

Ok, on to chapter two! :)
person Reena
schedule October 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm really happy that you want to continue your story and glad your doing fine. It's sad hearing what your brother ,grandmother and even you have to go through it must be difficult a time,managing everything and still taking out time for writing.The chapter as always pulled my heart strings specially the scene where Will is playing the piano and Ian is sitting next to him,there was nothing romantic about the scene but seeing them in the company of each other and just being happy and comfortable sharing that moment made me all warm and sad all at once,for what it could've been but it isn't and what it is and hopefully might be.The details in the story provides such a vivid picture, it's like I'm watching a series or a movie but I guess for me its even better than that. Love all the serious topics you bring up and really wish everybody could talk so openly about sexuality and such with an open mind. And let me tell you I was a little afraid that the story might become cliche and obvious after sometime but that hasn't happened till now and that makes me love the story more and always look forward for updates,thanks and lots of love to Selah-Seftali for bringing this story to us:)
person Reena
schedule October 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh how could I forget tell you,the way you wrote Will's performance was Hot and Stunning.The singing comes easily but it was hard for me to imagine Will dressed and dancing like that.And i thought the whole being married thing might turn into an issue but that was quite anticlimactic and you smoothed everything out and thats how you turned my usual guesses around once again and i like it even more for that.
person tinkerbabe7
schedule October 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
WOOOOOOOHOOOOOOOO I'm so glad you haven't abandoned this story!
I thought I wasn't going to be able to find out what happens.
I love the way you write and things that are said that truly make one think
I can't wait for you to post more!!!
I hope it'll be ASAP :D
Oh and it's nice that you and your grandmother get to spend time together and are closer.