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Ian could not have asked for a better friend. Will went above and beyond the call of 'best friend'. I'm not talking about the hand job. Just being there for Ian and his family was more than most friends would do. Will was certainly the best friend Ian could ever ask for.

This chapter also gave us some insight into how Will really feels and what he's trying to ignore. He's definitely doing a good job of fighting his feelings.

Wonderful chapter, Selah. And I'm so sorry you're going through what you're going through. I've never had to take care of a sick or dying loved one. My mom died in the hospice before I had to care for her. But just think of the wonderful thing you are doing to help your loved one. And you would much rather be doing this than the alternative, right? Think of what a godsend you are to your loved one and how appreciative he/she must be. You are definitely an angel, Selah.

Oh my GOD!!! OK so first off, I was feeling bad for Jo. But now I'm feeling bad for Paul. WTF. You've made my head turn. I don't know who I'm suppose to chose there. Your writing is simply divine. The roller coaster is killing me but I'm loving the ride. I've gotta say. I love Christian and I got a little fuzzy on the whole testing Ian's loyalty thing. Mostly I couldn't concentrate through my heart pounding in my ears. This is completely shallow and selfish and I can say this cause ya know ..it's fiction!! But I really hope Ian doesn't let Christian go for Will . That boy just has toooo far to go still. And Ian has been drug through enough.

I'm hoping and wishing that last scene is just a fantasy !! God tell me Will didn't do what it appears he's done. I already can't believe Ian even talks to that dick. I'm having a hard time forgiving him. I think it's only going to be worse. I love love love your story. Thanks for sharing it. Hopefully I'll have less typos. Really should review on my phone.

I don't even have words. You've officially sucker punched me. Poor Ian. He told Christian they weren't lovers. Obviously he lied. They might never had been an item, but they were most certainly lovers!! Even if it was one night. And the reason Will pushed Ian out though I've my suspicions that sex happened waayy before Will even crazier. I know he had a bad childhood. And I don't think he's bi. I might not dislike him so much if that were the case. I think stupid (Will) is actually gay!! Which pisses me off endlessly that he is such a tool. Oh well what can you do. I really feel like these people are my friends and I'm ready for so happy endings. Great great chapter though. Even more I cannot believe Ian is even talking to Will. That whole I got you you're safe let go bit.....fucking KILLED ME. I want to punch Will. Hard. Still such a great story.

Oh man,Will fell in love With Ian first,right?have to say i was expecting that the other way round(not because he's gay but because he was the romantic out of the two) well I really enjoyed this scene it started out so innocent and heated in seconds.Cheers to finally have the curtains raised,form how it all started to go whirlwind b/w Ian and Will.
I hope whatever time you have left with your grandmother are filled with true joy and love.Your a tough and humble soul,Selah.Keep fighting.

You said something about blog a few chapters ago,if your still planning to make one I'd love to follow you there or how about a tumblr acc?i follow another favorite author there.check it out when you have time, http://ohiowrites.tumblr.com/ and http://this-is-stigmata-pornography.tumblr.com/. well whatever you decide about the blog,I just want to say I love this author/reader connection we have and how you share a piece of your life every time you update whether its about the general events in your life,family situation,volunteering,kids,fun anecdotes.Its always been special.Could you provide a email add if readers want to PM you about something,that is if you don't mind.

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG. That is SO CRUEL BUT I LOVE IT ANYWAYS. GAAAAAAAAAAAH. This was defiantly a long time coming. Glad Will is bi even though he's clueless about it. JUST OMG. I can't wait for the next episode. pwwwwwwease don't make us wait toooooo long. Hahhaa.

I knew something like this might've been what pushed will to go mia! Anywho now that you've given us 2 wonderful chapter which I'm definitely thankful for I am totally greedy for the next one!!! Great job and I admire your courage and strength in what you are doing. Thoughts and prayers with you and your fam. <3

Probably my favorite chapter out of all. Will is bi and he don't even know it.

The starting with Paul and Jo was hilarious."People held a lot of tension in their assholes, apparently." god this line had me laughing hard.The chapter was wonderful Selah.My heart was really hurting for Christian but when Ian said he loved Will but not like before,It made me sad for Will because i totally believed it.I was breathless by the end of Will's sexcspade with those hot as hell small flashbacks.
I don't know anymore,I'm confused which pair is it fair to ship for.My heart is set on Ian/Will but it doesn't feel right to do this to Christan,thank god I'm not in their place or yours( my poor heart wouldn't be able to make a decision).What you mentioned about gendercide in India is something I've experienced here in my society,so u totally hit home with that.
Looking forward to you spoiling us yet again with a mini chapter/episode:)

Hi
Okay first of all:I had promised myself to not comment on your story until it has reached a coffee adding point(which I hope is a few chapter from now) but dammit! !! Your story and you writing style is so good that I can't hold my word of praise anymore!!!
One day if I want ti write an story you woyld be my best model to look up to!!(wich I doubt I ever do. I will forc..ehm, have my kid's become author and look up to you)
So in short I wanted to tell you" keep up the good work" (please at last keep it up to the point that my children can admire your work)
And I wanted to thank you for witing such a wonderful story! !! (And I sincerely apologise for my messed up english , because it's not my mother language.)