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February 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Selah! Glad to see your story updated!! I'm just writing this review to tell you that i'm still here patiently waiting for you and your stories~ Oh and how are you? Hope your real life is better now :")
Oh and about the story, good chapter as always coming from you. I'm kind of veryy curious about what Will have in mind throughout all the events in this chapter. I also missed their loving dancing scenes! I want to see the development of their relationship too! And what's going on with the people surrounding them. I'm sorry if this review feels like more of a demand than an actual review haha. I just can't help it, i always want to read moore and mooore of this!!
Lastly, i also missed your real life update, just want to know if you're okay or not these days, so if you don't mind, please do tell us more about you too.. :)
Oh and about the story, good chapter as always coming from you. I'm kind of veryy curious about what Will have in mind throughout all the events in this chapter. I also missed their loving dancing scenes! I want to see the development of their relationship too! And what's going on with the people surrounding them. I'm sorry if this review feels like more of a demand than an actual review haha. I just can't help it, i always want to read moore and mooore of this!!
Lastly, i also missed your real life update, just want to know if you're okay or not these days, so if you don't mind, please do tell us more about you too.. :)
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February 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I check this site daily for the sole purpose to see if you've been able to update. I'd kinda thought maybe you had to give this
up because of all your RL commitments. I couldn't belive it when I saw the title. I was over the moon. I know things are hard and you may not smile much but I hope it helps to know you sure caused them!
Man was this chapter so fantastic. Poor Ian I know it isn't his father who died and I'm probably feeling bad for the wrong one but I can't help but think how selfish Will is. God I seriously want to hit him. Im kinda missing the Ian that firmly sets boundaries with Will. I love this story so so much. And you are a spectacular writer. Rare in a fanfic author. You should consider trying to get published. If 50 shades of shit can be successful you damn well can. Not only do you have a great plot and weave a great story line, but oh yeah, you obviously passed junior high English class. Unlike 50 shades of shit.
Anyway than you eternally for writing and sharing this great story.
up because of all your RL commitments. I couldn't belive it when I saw the title. I was over the moon. I know things are hard and you may not smile much but I hope it helps to know you sure caused them!
Man was this chapter so fantastic. Poor Ian I know it isn't his father who died and I'm probably feeling bad for the wrong one but I can't help but think how selfish Will is. God I seriously want to hit him. Im kinda missing the Ian that firmly sets boundaries with Will. I love this story so so much. And you are a spectacular writer. Rare in a fanfic author. You should consider trying to get published. If 50 shades of shit can be successful you damn well can. Not only do you have a great plot and weave a great story line, but oh yeah, you obviously passed junior high English class. Unlike 50 shades of shit.
Anyway than you eternally for writing and sharing this great story.
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September 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm so sorry about your grandmother. There is nothing that I, an anonymous stranger on the internet, can say or do to make you feel better, but you have my empathy.
As for the story.. I hate it so very, very much when someone is the bearer of bad news and they just procrastinate so damn much in telling it.
"Will.."
"What is it?"
"Oh, Will..."
"What? What's wrong? Are the girls all right?"
"They're fine.."
"So what the ever loving fuck is wrong woman?"
"The girls are alright, but someone else is not.."
"Well, then who is it? Do I know them? Are they hurt? Dead? Dying? Are they at a hospital? The fuck, woman, I could've been in my car and driving to wherever I need to go in the time it took your slow ass to say my name for the third time, goddamn it woman."
"Will.."
"Fuck this, text me this shit" *hangs up*
That may have been a bit of a dramatization of what occurred in my head.
As for the story.. I hate it so very, very much when someone is the bearer of bad news and they just procrastinate so damn much in telling it.
"Will.."
"What is it?"
"Oh, Will..."
"What? What's wrong? Are the girls all right?"
"They're fine.."
"So what the ever loving fuck is wrong woman?"
"The girls are alright, but someone else is not.."
"Well, then who is it? Do I know them? Are they hurt? Dead? Dying? Are they at a hospital? The fuck, woman, I could've been in my car and driving to wherever I need to go in the time it took your slow ass to say my name for the third time, goddamn it woman."
"Will.."
"Fuck this, text me this shit" *hangs up*
That may have been a bit of a dramatization of what occurred in my head.
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September 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Selah, I'm so sorry about your grandmother. It must be so upsetting when a family member doesn't recognize you anymore. And I think it would be devastating for the one who is slowly forgetting. She's very lucky she has you in her life. Maybe she doesn't recognize you outwordly, but deep down inside I'm sure she remembers your touch, the way you talk, your love.
I'm also sorry about your love troubles. Love does suck, that's for sure.
I hope things work out for you. I'll be thinking of you. =)
This chapter was a hoot! :) The whole scene with Caleb (you called him Evan at the end when June says he left his phone number for Will), in the sex shop and then as Will and June's waiter was hysterical. I especially loved the part where the hugeass bottle of lube in the shape of a phallic symbol goes rolling down the floor. lol And then June picks it up! And then Caleb suggests extra butter!
I was confused a bit when Will was thinking that June and Ian's sister, Esme, would get along well together and that they should never be in the same room together b/c of this fact...I thought they already met at the park when they were there with their kids?
Jo and Paul's conversation was humorous in a sad kind of way. The best line though was, "Just because I often fantasize about your death doesn't mean I don't care about you." That one really made me lol. :)
Quick question: your reference to Karen Walker, was that one of the sisters from "Brothers and Sisters"? Just curious.
Anyway, awesome chapter, as always, Selah! :)
And again, I hope things are better for you now.
I'm also sorry about your love troubles. Love does suck, that's for sure.
I hope things work out for you. I'll be thinking of you. =)
This chapter was a hoot! :) The whole scene with Caleb (you called him Evan at the end when June says he left his phone number for Will), in the sex shop and then as Will and June's waiter was hysterical. I especially loved the part where the hugeass bottle of lube in the shape of a phallic symbol goes rolling down the floor. lol And then June picks it up! And then Caleb suggests extra butter!
I was confused a bit when Will was thinking that June and Ian's sister, Esme, would get along well together and that they should never be in the same room together b/c of this fact...I thought they already met at the park when they were there with their kids?
Jo and Paul's conversation was humorous in a sad kind of way. The best line though was, "Just because I often fantasize about your death doesn't mean I don't care about you." That one really made me lol. :)
Quick question: your reference to Karen Walker, was that one of the sisters from "Brothers and Sisters"? Just curious.
Anyway, awesome chapter, as always, Selah! :)
And again, I hope things are better for you now.
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September 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
MY GOD I have finally caught up to this point! I've laughed and cried though out all I've read so far and I am totally enjoying this story... I don't know why I haven't read this sooner I think maybe it was the summery or something that just didn't appeal to me. I am so HAPPY that I finally gave it a chance! I'm thinking that Ian is the one who is in trouble they say accidents happen usually with in 3 miles of the home.... I look forward to reading more and I HOPE that all that is happening in your life right now will get better sooner then later... read ya laters!
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September 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Omg selah, i'm so sorry to know what you have to go through. I too feel somewhat deppresed lately, life has been more hectic than ever yet i still feel some kind of hollowness creeping inside me. We have no choice but to fight our own battle right? I hope amidst all the chaos and dark time of your life you can still find happiness even in the smallest things. I hope life will get better for you and i do believe that you have made choices you won't ever regret, be it about your grandma and that ex lover of yours too. Really wish i can hug youu but since it's physically impossible, let me just send you a virtual hug, kay? /squeeezetightlyy
I have faith in you as an author, i know you would continue this wonderful story <3 this chapter indeed feels a bit all over the place, unlike your usual somehow rythmical writing, but nevertheless i still love love love this chapter! I want you to know that even if we are in a different part of the world, i do care about you, i'm obsessed with this story (and Will) and i will always be waiting for the continuation of this story no matter how long it takes.
Keep fighting lady! I know you can! I just can tell that you are a super woman! When things get rough, just remember that you have fans all over the world who loves you and your writings very much.
Now i'm sorry if i sound so weird, since i'm no good at cheering people hahah.. Good luck to you though!
I have faith in you as an author, i know you would continue this wonderful story <3 this chapter indeed feels a bit all over the place, unlike your usual somehow rythmical writing, but nevertheless i still love love love this chapter! I want you to know that even if we are in a different part of the world, i do care about you, i'm obsessed with this story (and Will) and i will always be waiting for the continuation of this story no matter how long it takes.
Keep fighting lady! I know you can! I just can tell that you are a super woman! When things get rough, just remember that you have fans all over the world who loves you and your writings very much.
Now i'm sorry if i sound so weird, since i'm no good at cheering people hahah.. Good luck to you though!
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September 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yay an update! I was beginning to think you might not be able to continue this. It sounds like RL is very hard right now. I'm so sorry to hear it. What a brave and wonderful thing you are giving her and doing. On a brighter note though this is a fabulous chapter. I could have kept on reading and reading. I love your writing style. Thank you for not butchering the English language. Its refreshing. Mostly I'm delaying my anxiety. Who is it. Ian or Will's estranged mother. I don't feel like this chapter was flat at all. I just am so nervous to hear what June says. An adoring fan will certainly wait forever, but for my piece of mind I hope it isn't too awful long. I'm too nervous.
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June 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon, Ian and Will are indeed precious!
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March 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! Finally, some wonderful Wilan moments! (hmmm not sure what exactly is their couple name)
I was behind 3 chapters but I'm all caught up, thankfully! lol.
They are so freaking adorable together- even though they aren't together together just yet ;)
I feel bad for Christian but I'm glad he did what he knows needed to be done although he could have done it better.
I wonder how Marine will fit into this and how she will get out of the picture.... lol
Well Can't wait to read some more wonderful chapters. I always look forward to this story. One of my Favorites!!!!! :D
I was behind 3 chapters but I'm all caught up, thankfully! lol.
They are so freaking adorable together- even though they aren't together together just yet ;)
I feel bad for Christian but I'm glad he did what he knows needed to be done although he could have done it better.
I wonder how Marine will fit into this and how she will get out of the picture.... lol
Well Can't wait to read some more wonderful chapters. I always look forward to this story. One of my Favorites!!!!! :D
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March 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 13: That whole scene with Jo and Paul in the bedroom was hysterical. "It's like a condemned property down there!" Omg, I was cracking up so hard! "All the necessary parts are accessible." Man, Jo's a pip! :) And Paul was funny: "I just don't want to floss my teeth in the process." Shit that was priceless! :)
I will admit though, that I was really thrown by Christian's behavior when the three of them were at his penthouse. I wonder if he would have stopped it himself if Ian didn't. I'm also surprised that he wants to take a break to reevaluate his relationship with Ian.
Terrific chapter as always, Selah! :) On to chapter fourteen. (I feel like I won the lottery with two chapters posted so close together! =))
I will admit though, that I was really thrown by Christian's behavior when the three of them were at his penthouse. I wonder if he would have stopped it himself if Ian didn't. I'm also surprised that he wants to take a break to reevaluate his relationship with Ian.
Terrific chapter as always, Selah! :) On to chapter fourteen. (I feel like I won the lottery with two chapters posted so close together! =))