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I was listening to edith piafs "non regrette rien"while reading this and God, didn't they go well together.

(I'm so jealous you got a dog!)

Once again thank you for writing this wonderfully story!!💖

They're finally together! I'm so happy for the both of them. Finally!! Thank you for this another beautiful chapter. And oh, I'm happy for you and your new dog Alastor. See you on the nect chapter. Can't wait! (:

Your characters and plot are so reveting, I love this story. For a while I worried that you wouldnt have the time to continue and I'm happy to hear that your house has been rebuilt and that you've adopted a dog in need. I as the pet owner of two 'lil shits' I completely understand your frustration. Thank you for the story, I look forward to reading future chapters. Best of luck.

GAH!!!!!!!!!! I got all the way to the end of the chapter, ready to click on the next chapter, when THERE WASN'T A NEXT CHAPTER!!!! I'm so upset that I'm all caught up!:( Selah, seriously, you need to publish this. It's one of the most well-written and captivating stories I've ever read. And I read a lot. As for your personal life, I'm so sorry that you're still homeless. How long do you have to wait until the insurance company pays you? They will pay you, won't they? You must be a saint in your school district's eyes. What a tough job you have! Having to deal with violent, autistic teenagers cannot be easy. I give you so much credit for that. And that one boy who you're not walking away from is so lucky to have you as his teacher. His parents are the lucky ones too. Good luck with your housing situation, Selah. I hope you find someplace soon. I'll be thinking of you.

Selah, I just finished reading chapter 22, and I wanted to tell you how sorry I am to hear about your house. That must be completely devastating. My heart broke when I heard about your dog. I am so, so sorry. I hope things are better for you now - thank God for family and friends, and b/f families. You're in my thoughts and prayers.

Selah, I'm almost done reading chapter 22, but I just wanted to let you know how addictive this story is! If it weren't for my job, my kids, and my pets, I'd be all caught up! lol I read the chapters on my phone while I'm waiting in the doctor's office, waiting for school to get out, etc., etc. I'll be able to leave a proper review when I'm through with the chapter. And what a chapter it is so far! lol Awesome job, Selah! :)

Gosh what a cliffhanger! >_< I thought Will was finally going to let it out and say it to Ian! urgh! I'm dying for the next update. And oh, that last bit about your work and that student of yours is so touching. You have a good heart. God bless!

Thank you for this lovely long chapter! I really enjoyed reading every single scene on this. Now that chapter ending, would will finally choose Ian? I'm dying to read what's gonna happen next! By the way, sorry to hear about your house and your dog. I've recently lost my dog too and I know how much it hurts. I hope everything will be fine soon for you and you'll recover in no time. God bless! :) And oh one more thing, I thought your boyfriend was your bestfriend? Am I right? haha. Sorry, I'm just curious. xD

I am so sorry for your loss. I know from my own personal experience with losing my "Nutty" how painful it can be. How your experience is I don't know because it is yours alone. I will send good thoughts and vibes your way. You are an amazing writer (seriously one of the best on this site, why aren't you published?) and no matter how much time you need you will always have those of us that are so impressed with this story that we will be here when you are able to post so take your time. Know that your efforts of taking our minds on adventures are greatly appreciated.

Selah!!!! This was another chapter that had me rolling on the floor. Lauren is just precious and adorable and when she was yelling at Lola (I know so many dogs named Lola!)about not having fashion sense, I just lost it! She's just so cute! :)

I love the flashbacks; I probably told you that in other reviews. They show Will in a different light than he is in the present (if that makes sense!). It's obvious Will has had strong feelings for Ian for a long time, yet he's been too afraid to admit to them/confess to Ian.

I don't remember my previous review (shoulda checked it before I added this one, but I'm too lazy! lol), so if I'm repeating myself, don't mind me and totally disregard what I'm saying. :) There was a story on here (well, a few stories actually), by this author who wrote about sub/dom relationships, and she described the dom as saying to the sub to just let go and fly (or some such phrasing). Now I understand that better after reading your comment about flying. There's also a story on another site that I'm crazy about, and the main character is a sub when it comes to sex, and he loves having dominant sex partners. He gets into this subspace, or as he calls it, a submissive trance that he absolutely loves. He describes it as having like a cloud come over him, and the rest of the world sort of disappears for a while. I guess it's just hard for me to understand, never having that kind of relationship in the bedroom. Are you kidding? My db ex (db=douchebag) was controlling enough OUTSIDE of the bedroom, which I HATED, always needing to have everything his way. What a db.

It was nice to see Dylan again; I hope things work out for him.

Hope your asthma is better now, Selah, and you can sing again. :)

Terrific chapter, as always! Oh, I noticed a typo: in the flashback when I&W were in the plane, Ian saw Will eating peanuts and he thought to himself that he's hungry, but it was spelled 'hungary'(I think that's how it was spelled). Anyway, thought you might want to go back and fix it. :)