rate_review Reviews

Color me intrigued. So far, I'm loving the interaction between the two lead characters. They're very funny together. I think they have a lovely kind of rhythm, if that makes any sense. I'm anxious to see where this story leads! On to the next chapter...

The plot thickens! Okay, this second chapter was much better than the first. I'm liking the premise of this story. It reminds me of a lot of romantic comedy type plot lines. However, so far, that's not a count against this story at all. The plot doesn't feel stale or tired. I'm absolutely loving the writing. I've read quite a few stories on this site, and most of them suffer from either terrible writing or a dreadful plot. So far, this story suffers from neither. You have a very strong sense of setting, with beautiful description that I think really draws the reader in. I am anxious to discover more about these characters, and I can't wait to read what happens next. If it continues on like this, I hope you will update soon and often!

I'm so looking forward to the next chapter. I got a feeling this is going to be real good.I love the characters and how the story is unfolding. Don't take too long to post next chapter