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Thank you for this story! I love it so far and am very much looking forward to reading more!

Wow. This is incredible. I am in love with Will and Ian. I'm desperate to know what Will did to Ian...OH THE PAIN OF WAITING. haha. And I gotta say, Ian is pure amazingness. He's so eloquent and incredibly spoken. Your characters seem real which doesn't happen for a lot of authors on here. Please don't give up on this story for I am ecstatic to see where this goes. XD
Much love!

Here's the thing. This story is nice and all, and I liked the main couple in the beginning but you seem to be incapable of making a character that I don't absolutely love. I like the boyfriend, the fiance, the sister, and even the lawyer so far. The co-owner of the company has potential to be a dick, but for the most part I want everyone of your characters to be happy. They're just so well rounded and after reading so many non-free slash stories I'm kind of unaccustomed to the character depth. Thanks for the nice read.

Good chapter! I'm loving Esme so far. I'm very curious to learn more about Ian's boyfriend too. He seems sweet. What I like about this chapter is that we get to see how Will and Ian have changed. The younger Will seemed so funny and lively and outgoing. But the grown-up Will is more reserved and droopy. Maybe you're trying to tell us that Ian is the secret ingredient to bringing Will's groove back?1 And I was so surprised to discover that it was Ian at the end! I'm loving that little twist. I can't wait for the next chapter. Really. Can't wait. Is it too much to hope that you'll be updating this frequently in the future? Yes? No? Keep em coming!

God I was so happy to see a update.I was feeling really sad and then going aww at times when Ian was going through Will and his old pics.It made me feel bittersweet you know because I can totally relate to that,having a best friend with whom ur inseparable once and then something comes in between and after years when you meet them it's all awkward but u still know somewhere that the way you used click with each other is something you cannot find with anybody else.I cant wait to see them together in the next chapter while Marin is there;)oh i loved the tango part it was sizzling.And please don't say please to keep reading because its already become one of my favorite jus after 3 chapters...please keep writing8D

whoa what a shocker at the end of the last chapter! You are so talented and this is written so beautifully and complexly!! you have real talent and i can't wait to see where this goes! ugh love this to pieces and its so new and refreshing :)) So happy to finally find such a gem :)

Wow! I'm really loving this story so far. The descriptions are really nicely written and your character development is unbelievable. Well done! :)

First two chapters were pretty good they already have me excited for more...loved the conversation' parts between Will and Ian before and after 11 years. I'm really glad your writing the story from both of the protagonist's POV's, it makes it so much easier to understand them,where their coming from,their emotional turbulence's and circumstances n stuff like that better than randomly keep guessing.

Nice start. You have a wonderful Vocabulary and your scenery is beautifully painted for your readers. Your characters are captivating. I honestly Can't wait to see where you take this.

Thank you for the story and I hope you update soon.

Wow I'm speechless. I can't believe what Will did to Ian, so cruel of him. I really felt sorry for Ian. I wish they can be, and fast, together.

Good plot and I enjoyed the writing style.