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Yay i was so happy you updated.God you sure have your hands full but you still updated thank you so much.The chapter was gr8 but i really wanted to read what Ian was thinking the whole time they were together it was just Will and his thoughts.Well i love the details you throw in there like when you describe diff latin dance's,i felt like taking those classes they sound so fun with your character's in them and same goes for the cafe and the food mmmm you make me visualize and physically be there...your really good at this,love your story and of course you for bringing it to us:)

Sensei plz update:(...!!!

Oh! Good to see Ian had a dark side! He was starting to seem like a saint. This was definitely a women-centered chapter. I usually hate that in an M/M slash story, but I loved it in this case. They were extremely funny, they moved the plot along nicely, and we got to see more of our main guys through their eyes. My only concern is that I really love Christian :-( And since it's no surprise that Will and Ian will get together at least in some capacity, I'm really worried for poor Christian. You've done a great job in creating a host of other characters who all seem fleshed out already without making the story seem overwhelmed by them, and you've made me love them! I can't wait to read more about everyone! Keep up the good work.

wow! this is great! I love it already! You shogld defenitely do more than get your feet wet when it comes to writing!
I don't think I have ever seen such an interesting couples dynamic before! I will follow this avidly, rest assured!

Thanks for the little note for me i read the whole thing ya so i hope your past ghosts remain in the past & never trouble u again,my warm wishes for one of my fav authors.As for the new chapter...what will Christian say about this whole situation i really wonder...this is getting so good.Love June'S Character she is really funny and silly how she was trying to spy on her brother..oh and ive done that too when was younger but i was probed into it by my sister and friend,even though i was totally against it i must admit in its own stupid way it was fun hehehe. I really got a better picture of Will and Ian now after how June described them,i'm really looking forward to the next chapter.

I really like this story! The characters are dynamic and exciting. Though I DO like the idea of Will and Ian together, I really like Christian and Ian more! Their relationship seems really adorable and I love it so much! I would hate to see it end!! That, and it's been SO long a time since Will's ignored Ian that it would take a long time for Ian to get over that betrayal and heartache.
Looking forward to where this is going, but I really like Christian!!!!!!!!
~hitachiintwinlover

Oh! Hahaha-the ending! I am loving Ian and Will and JUNE! She seems such a fun character but also one who doesn't think before they do-like how would Marin (sorry if I got that wrong) feel if she knew why she gave the gift cirtificate-BUT don't change her! I actually don't feel sorry for marin but I do for chris :(. It's great how you can make me enjoy the secondary cast as well-can't wait for the next ch!

"It was the city's own, permanent AIDS quilt." i couldnt help but laugh when i read this part and thought,... well that doesnt sound good at all

Oh I could kiss you! That was hilarious and I will never again read future chapters while eating or drinking anything. I was innocently enjoying my berry banana smoothie when I came to this line, "stop arguing the toss and grasp the nettle," and I had smoothie coming out my nose in an attempt not to ruin my laptop by spraying. Then the ending, oh goddess it was just too much. Looking forward to more.

Ok now you have got me invested, I have a good feeling about this story. Could not be happier to hear that you don't abandon stories, glad you concur that gets very frustrating. You are off to a wonderful start, will be looking forward to more...