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I've been reading this story for a long time and I never reviewed. Glad to see it back. I just saw it today and re-read the whole thing. I feel bad for max. He was just starting to really have fun with David! And David is brave for admitting he was wrong. I wish he would have stopped it from happening. Make David fix everything so they can get married!

Eric is funny. I hope we see more of him! Is David's mom really going to kidnap him?

Also, when you are talking about guys, it should be "brunet" and "blond" not blonde and brunette.. That implies that they are girls.

Haha Paige, you're funny! Hey, at least your b/f doesn't think YOU'RE weird! The guy I'm with just doesn't understand why I read gay porn, so I try to do it when he's not around. Oh, and when I hear his car or his footsteps on the stairs, I quickly get out of whatever smut I'm reading and click on the stories I have to edit. lol He probably thinks that's gay porn too. Well, actually it is. lol Hey, at least I'm not sitting here WATCHING GAY PORN!!! Not that there's anything wrong with that, but I think reading it is tamer than watching it. Plus, you can't watch it when your kids are around. lol

Ok, on to the story: Poor Max. Poor David. Mean Max is scary; it's like he can never forgive David. David gave him two million and a ring to start with. So now Max has to cash the ring in? And David thinks he's just gonna waltz right up to Rachel at w/e island she's at and demand the money? And he thinks she's gonna give it to him? Ha! lol

Can't wait to see how this plays out. Oh...did David go to his other bank deposit boxes? I know he had them all over the city. I think I mentioned this in my last review. He's gotta have more than the two million. Wait, how would Rachel have gotten ahold of his stuff? And didn't he take a lot of her money from the closet that one time?

Anyway....can't wait for more! :)

OMG!! So exciting and want to read more soon. I would like to know what will gonna happen with Max and David ... >o<

OMFG I think I may have an ulcer I'm so....AGH! I don't even know! Plz don't make us wait to know what happens next. Poor Max... a calm reaction is way worse than flipping out. He must be so shattered inside.

I didn't think you got as far in the original...

Shit, David's going to jail. Rachel too, but she deserves it. What about Victor? David has to pin this on him too.

And I thought that David took all his stuff and pulled it out of their joint bank deposit box and spread it around to different banks all over the city. I thought all his money and such was safe.

I'm on pins and needles now waiting for the next chapter. :)

Oh no! The morning has to come eventually, and I only hope it’s gonna be a happy ending.
Thanks for the update!

I literally went "FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK." It was deleted? Damn I hate that! I wanted to see the drama and hopefully the make up as well.

Geez.......Geez I like this story X3 Just addicted to the characters.

I can't imagine how nervous, anxious and scared David is b/c he knows the next day is doomsday. Telling Max those things was a good prelude though. lol I'm anxious myself and it's not even me that fucked up that bad. hahah

I'm looking foward to the next chapter. Even if you have to write it all over from scratch Paige, I know it'll be terrific. :)

Aww...David’s growing a conscience! His self-denial is cute!
Thanks for the chapter!

Maggie’s very cute! (My cat actually plays fetch by herself, too....maybe she’s part terrier? She’s certainly a terror...)
Been without internet for a week, and really missed this story!
Max is so caring. Wonder what will happen if he ever finds out David is planning to con him out of millions...
Ah, the contrast between David’s relationship with Rachel and Max...I love David running on instinct!
Thanks for the chapter!