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I love this story. I just hope Max gets all of his money back.. because he didn't deserve that
To happen to him. I want for them to end up together somehow but if they dont I will be
Fine as long as he gets his money

Ohohohoho...You didn't just live it at that.'Cause if you did,I would've been crying my eyes out somewhere.
*goes crawling to a corner and bowls her eyes out*Yeah see!No tears!*sniffles*

Wow!David actually did go knocking her door and asking for the money!Genius plan really.He was lucky Rachel was dumb enough to have already gotten rid of victor.Speaking of which.He got deported?Really?!So he's in prison now or something?

Black nail polish?Really?For a moment there,I thought he's going to go all badassly emo on her and polish his finger nails,maybe even dye his hair or something to show he 'doesn't care anymore and that he has nothing more to lose!'*dramatic swing of arm to forehead*

Hehe tongue piercing would be awesome!Imagine the look on Max's face when he finds out...

Oh my goodness!Is David going to get to Max in time?What if he goes to prison!My poor heart can't take the pressure.Aaah~*faints*

This story is so awesome I don't even know how to praise it. Dude, chapter 10 - in all my 7 years of reading m/m fiction I've never read that moment of intimacy between 2 people described so perfect..I don't know how you did it, but you captured such an intimate moment so good,it made me almost jealous- I want to experience that feeling too !!! The way they were together in that bed, both of them understanding each other without much words ....I read that chapter over and over and I can't get enough of it.
Anyway, shame on you for saying you write crap, this story is great,your style is not boring,it keeps me on the edge,it has substance and I could continue on forever.
P.S.: please don't stop updating,I am so into this story, I really want to know how this is going to end.
P.S.2: dude seriously this is NOT going to have a happy ending? I mean, I hate to see a happy ending when the circumstances don't ask for it and I hate to see a sad ending when there's a chance of them being together. I know that Max can forgive David.:( If it has a bad ending, I'll haunt you until you change it to happy.I will.Be prepared.

Well, that seemed too easy for David. And wait, what's David going to do now that he got Rachel to sign the papers? How will that get Max's money back?

Anxiously awaiting the next chapter. :)

Yeah you make your bf sound like a douchebag even though he's probably wonderful lol. Most guys are weird out by yaoi so its understandable.

Also man I love cursing Max; he should appear more often. Totally. Maybe like cursing while he's doing David? Well if they hook back up together.

Can David like slap the fuck out of his ex gf? No double standard? Just BAM. I'm actually on the edge of my seat waiting.

My gosh! This chapter was packed full of tension - I swear I must have felt as nervous as David (biting my nails and everything)!
Well, Max, is David worth 15 million?!? (Please say yes!)
Really relieved to hear that Max isn't completely destitute now!
Many thanks for the chapter!

I hope David finds Racheal in time. Wonder how that conversation b/t the two will go...
Oh Max! I hope he forgives David (I'm a sucker for a happy ending).
Thanks for the update! Looking forward to more!

Oh Gaaawwwwddddd!!!!!Pleaaaasssse tell me you're going to update soon and fast!I don't think my poor little heart could take it!*Beaten puupy dog eyes*

Poor poor David!At least he tried to stop it.Max should see the full half of the glass!He's kinda being an asshole,which is justifiable of course,but still...

David can't just go to Rachel's door and say get his money back:'Hey!See my boyfriend is pissed at and I was wondering if I could get the money back?'
'Yeah sure!Why not!C'mon in!The kettle's just boiled!You like Italian?'

...Yeah...not gonna happen.You need a better plan man!

I have read the original version first and I am thrilled now to read the new developments!
I love pissed off Max. I kind of have a weak spot for the darker sides of the good guys (at least in fiction hehe) so theses chapters are fun. I can't wait to see how the relationship between Max and David will look like now (it is not over yet, no!).
In my humble opinion Max should get his money back plus a bonus - David as a sex slave, yaaay!

I think I have been reading too much of this stuff lately...

I found this question in Yahoo!Answers and it was just too 'OMFG' to not come screaming and tell you!

There was a guy named David who had asked I quote:"Can pilots get their tongue pierced?"
No joke!And I was like 'Whaaaa-?????Oh My God!!!Talk about chances!!I've gotta tell her this!!!'

So tell me...Is David planning on getting a tongue piercing?Wants to have surprises for Max for when they get back together?So...'Cause he's already at it and stuff...Can he get a nipple piercing,too?*glittering fangirl eyes*