rate_review Reviews

Whoops. I meant to say Phil, I my previous review. I don't know why the hell it says Paul... O_o Maybe it's my lack of sleep... I had a late night. So glad I got to read your update after this busy week though, it really takes my mind off of things!

Personally I want Max and David to get back together.. not because I'm a sucker for happy ever after but even tho Max is bitter and David is angry with the world..there are still unresolved feelings there .. and Max will always hold that special place in Davids heart

Oh no! How's David gonna explain this to Eric?! (Or maybe he just won't...)
Will Eric play matchmaker and repair David and Max's relationship...?(hopeful...)
Good luck with school!
Many thanks for the chapter.

I need more! hehe... I really hope Max can forgive David. I know it's going to be rocky but I love them together!!! I can see Eric as matchmaker and also as someone that would forgive David if he found out - he'd probably yell at him about losing the best thing to ever happen to him and then help him get Max back. I'm sure Max has trust issues now but I just hope he doesn't get lonely enough that he goes back to his ex :(

I know! David is a sweet heart! Sorry I just REALLY mad at Rachel. That means you have good characterization. I rarely hate on characters but oh man I hated her!

I dunno your story gives me weird ideas. Ending made me feel bad though but I guess its karma biting David on the ass. Oh btw take your time. Real life comes first. I waited years for another story and months for another one so you're updating pretty fast.

Good luck in college!

I really enjoy this story and even if they do not end together it is a great romance. I understand how difficult it is to manage your life when you are in college.

Goddammit! I had a whole review and AFF ate it. Ok, Reader's Digest version: I'm confused. lol The end of the chapter has David looking in his fridge for something and he's in his condo. Did I miss something somewhere? When did he get a condo? I know that he shared that apartment with the Russian and Rachel (what happened to the Russian again?), and they cleaned out the place, but isn't it still his?

And at the end, when David is at his place and someone's at the door, he opens it and sees Eric and Eric is complaining that he's been trying to get ahold of David all week. Then David interrupts Eric and tells him he (David), needs a place to crash. Huh? Or did I read that all wrong? lol

Other than that, great chapter Paige! :) I wonder if Max will ever cool down enough to forgive David, or at least hear his side of things. He'll start missing him too much. Oh, wait, maybe Eric has some news about Max. Oh no, Max wouldn't tell anyone about what happened and he told David not to either. Oi, I'll just have to wait for the next update. :)

Good luck with school Paige and I look forward to the next chapter! :)

...................."like a fat man diving down to save falling hotdogs at an Independence Day barbecue"....................................................

Wow! I can't believe Rachael fell for it (but i guess she wouldn't chance her own life, she's so full of it). Will David really get away unscathed?! Has Rachael prepared for this possibility(after all, she hired a body guard...)?!
Hope you feel better soon!

Damn I thought he was going to beat her ass/scare her ass/etc. more.

Oh well. I still got a thrill on the bitch. I hated her from the start. I never hated a character this much in a while.

Too bad Max and David are not (maybe) Sort of going to hook back together. That would had been kinky. God I love your characters if I'm debating if I can make nothing but PWPs out of them. Like some Russian dude makes V gay, Max and David kink, and some lesbian fucks up Rachel. Yeah I'm horrible.