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Btw I will absolutely post reviews after every update from here on out ;)

UPDATE!!!!!

Hehehe no pressure lol I know life can get in the way a lot of times but I would love you so much more than I already do if there's an update this month, I can only go so long without something amazing to read.. I hope you have some faves or recommendations on your profile. Your writing talent makes me completely trust your judgement on stories so maybe I'll find something to hold me over till you update =p

Lolol that's funny, you know that code thing we gotta type in when we write reviews?? Well the code I have to type says "David eatnet" in think its a sign.. I think David is dying for an update too so he can get back together with max already.. And finish up that sexy time with stoner dude ;) (I wonder if he'll get into that destructive "fuck any guy to forget" phase or if he'll completely regret it and fall back into the overworking over running thing)

Heya Paige! I was just thinking of this story the other day. I found it in the 'search' option and quickly realized that you had updated and I MISSED IT!!!!! What rock was I hiding under, I'll never know, but luckily for me, I CAN READ IT NOW! lol

Shit, now I forgot which chapter I just read. Then one where "the two blonde faggots" go into Max's dealership and David lays 100G for a new car. ;) And then Max tells the HR girl to fire Rob, New York is a fire-at-will state, after all. Oh yeah, and David's yelling and screaming at his family that he hasn't changed at all, he just fucks guys now. I was fucking rolling on the floor, Paige! Holy shit, that was funny! And he's certainly NOT going to be Sarah's stylist! lol

Ok, awesome chapter, Paige, on to the next one...

Sniff, sniff, I was so excited that I missed so many chapters, only to realize I only missed two!!!

Eric was right, David said the most beautiful things about Max. Max is still angry, of course he is, but I think one of these days he's gonna thaw out. He's gonna get fed up with that ass Phil (who he's using to run away from David), and figure out what is more important to him: being so angry with someone he loves b/c this person did him wrong (even though he came clean and paid him back in full), or forgiving this person who so obviously loves you back. They are both miserable. Max is trying to forget David by being with Phil again (gag me, lol), and David is trying to forget Max by drinking, smoking, and running. At least with all his running, he's not putting on any pounds by all the booze he's drinking. lol

There's another story I read on another site that also had one of the main characters running whenever something went wrong. He'd run for hours, miles upon miles, until his head cleared.

Anyway, now I'm all caught up and I can say what I wanted to when I came on here earlier: please updat Paige! This story is so good, I just want to keep reading it forever. :)

Sonofabitch. I did this whole fucking review and AFF ate it.

Grrr, ok, Reader's Digest version: Fire_Demon is fucking hysterical!!!! mofo pendjero (did I spell that right?), too funny! And the whole Snow White poem, fucking ingenious! :)

Ok, so after I read all the reviews for May, I realized that I ALREADY R&R'D the last two chapters!!!! Where the hell is my head? Up my ass, apparently! I am sorry, I will never forget these two chapters again. :(

But...now that I'm all caught up, it's almost exactly two months to the day of your last update. I hope you didn't forget about the story, Paige! It's too good to forget!!!!! I hope you can update soon. =)

*Making way through the dust and the spider webs*Helooo???*cough cough*Is anybody there???Ecooo~*eco eco eco*
Aliens haven't abducted you AGAIN have they???*gaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!A-a-SPIDER!!!!!Kill it killitkillit*

Faggots anonymous, that's hysterical! Wow David really went off on his family!

Now Max is jealous thinking that David moved on. I wonder if Eric is inviting Max to his party. They are still friends, right? That must be awkward for all of them.

Ok, onto the next chapter!

Glad you're back! :)

I agree with Eric; David did say beautiful things about Max. It's going to take a long time for Max to forgive David, if he ever does.

And I can't believe Max is with that ass Phil again! He must be desperate, lol. I totally get Max still being furious with David, but I think Max is hurt so much by what David did, b/c he loved him. He loved him and he trusted him and David betrayed that trust.

So now David is going to drown his drunken stoned self with a three-way. No better way to beat the blues. lol :)

The opening of this chapie with drunk David made me laugh (I've run into glass doors before, and I wasn't even drunk!) ; ) Just a little confused about the ending - has Max gone to bed with Eric, or Trent? As always, excited for the next chapter! Come on Max, you know you love him!

If David and Max end up together or not they will always have those unresolved with that
Being said if they ever get back together Max first has to grow a pair of balls and dump/leave
Phil.. Phil is not good for him and even tho hes hurt.. David taught him that much to stand up for himself

Didn't know this got updated til today. Was hidden by so much other stuff.

I don't want the fucking; I want the making up! I want the drama and bitch slapping and confusion. Yeah I'm worse than Eric. lol.