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by Paige_Turner

person Sephla
schedule October 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoying this story. Can't wait to read more. Sooooo glad that Max seems to be entertaining the idea of giving David another chance. That was really crappy of David to do that to Max but you can't help but to like and feel sorry for David, especially since he was in a situation that was partly out of his control or at least that's how David perceived it. Anywhoots, again, YAY!!
person sabaku_lotus
schedule September 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
too lazy to sign in but I'm reviewing this.

REALLY? That one dude is married? You're kidding me right? I need to re read that chapter then! So he's bisexual/one night stand eh?

Also the last chapter has so much drama drama drama and I'm glad the other dude ended up being gay/bisexual (co pilot heh.)
schedule September 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yes!!! Thank god for drunk David lol I feel like that would've never happened otherwise ;p and I'm seriously glad that the whole situation had max's mind flooding with memories of David and their relationship... Hopefully he'll start to realize how foolish that promise he made to himself is.. It'd be awesome if those David memories just continue to flood his thoughts lol I feel like that could help things along nicely ;)

I'm loving how much quicker these chapters are coming in, looking forward to the next update <333
person cheesekun
schedule September 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yay! So maybe Max and David will end up together after all!:D Many thanks for the new chapter!
person J
schedule September 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
YAY! WOW... Fast update! THANK YOU!
MORE PLEASE!
Thanks for translation, I could read the words for "wife" but not the idiom XD
I'm not so good at chinese idioms myself, but your translation definitely cleared things up (...-and now I know the word for "lust" in chinese O_O )
schedule September 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yay for drunken David confessing to Max that he still loved him.

I'm glad Max was considering taking David back.

I was just about to write how confused I was about the part in italics in the club, when I realized that it was Max thinking back to when he first met David, right? I think the name 'Jake' threw me off. Who's Jake? lol
person zas
schedule September 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was nice, I hope max forgive D, it's all on that bitch of a girlfriend he had
person RitsuO3O
schedule September 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing! I love it, I look forward to the next chapter.
person animekid
schedule September 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ok decided to sign in. I had to re read this shit because apparently I forgot what part I stopped and Aff.org likes to troll people with updates. And the url changed on me. Among other things.

Its still a bloody good read so I'll review what I missed.
person animekid
schedule September 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Still reading this. God this chapter I wanted to laugh at the comparisons and how "Is it gay to hold you,' type of thing.