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November 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Paige, what a fantastic story! I'm so glad you finished it! :)
I'm thrilled Max took David back! I just love their chemistry; they really are great together.
Looking forward to the epilogue! =)
I'm thrilled Max took David back! I just love their chemistry; they really are great together.
Looking forward to the epilogue! =)
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October 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
There I signed in to review this damn thing.
Yes its hot. No I don't care if they get married. Yes I want them together. Yes I want them together and to keep on fucking. Yes Phil is a dick. Yes Max is unsure enough. etc. etc. etc.
Seriously its almost over? That sucks. I really enjoyed the ride. I loved how it went from "I dunno if I'm gay," to "God I want you to fuck me in the ass." Condoms will and always will be a kink of mine.
12am and I'm still up lol.
Yes its hot. No I don't care if they get married. Yes I want them together. Yes I want them together and to keep on fucking. Yes Phil is a dick. Yes Max is unsure enough. etc. etc. etc.
Seriously its almost over? That sucks. I really enjoyed the ride. I loved how it went from "I dunno if I'm gay," to "God I want you to fuck me in the ass." Condoms will and always will be a kink of mine.
12am and I'm still up lol.
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October 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It was perfect! And the smex was definitely hot ;)
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October 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ch 29
Omg you have made my week with this chapter, it brought tears to my eyes and I really didn't think it would O.O
After reading the dialogue in this chapter I got a better understanding of why max had been so resistant and reluctant when it came to even communicating with David after everything came out. I really get where he was coming from now, I thought I got it before but at the same time I was still a bit irritated with max before this chapter. I love how comparing Phil and David is what really brought it home for max, that made me beyond happy that Phil's numerous flaws helped max bring light to David's value as a person and a boyfriend.
Can't wait for your next update!!!
Omg you have made my week with this chapter, it brought tears to my eyes and I really didn't think it would O.O
After reading the dialogue in this chapter I got a better understanding of why max had been so resistant and reluctant when it came to even communicating with David after everything came out. I really get where he was coming from now, I thought I got it before but at the same time I was still a bit irritated with max before this chapter. I love how comparing Phil and David is what really brought it home for max, that made me beyond happy that Phil's numerous flaws helped max bring light to David's value as a person and a boyfriend.
Can't wait for your next update!!!
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October 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Are these two going to get married? Please say yes....this chapter I have been waiting for ages. I don't care if its a cliffhanger but finally FINALLY.
At least there was no spanking. Or balls hanging instead it was just angst and fluff.
At least there was no spanking. Or balls hanging instead it was just angst and fluff.
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October 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ah, Paige, what a riveting chapter! :)
I'm so glad Max is giving David another chance. They have missed each other and I know Max loves David also. That's why what David did hurts so much.
Can't wait for the next update! You go, girl! :)
I'm so glad Max is giving David another chance. They have missed each other and I know Max loves David also. That's why what David did hurts so much.
Can't wait for the next update! You go, girl! :)
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October 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Yay!Thanks for the update. Maybe you're not so bad after all, Max...;P
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October 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for these last chapters. I must admit, some chapters were quite a torture for me : i felt so bad for our men ;___; but the two last ones made me love the story again. I was glad that Max made a comeback and chapter 29 was the best. I hope we can read the next chapter very soon. By the way, why chapters don't have titles anymore?
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October 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my lord! What an awesome chapter!! I loved it! I'm so happy they finaly reunited!
I really can't wait for the next chapter! Thanks for this awesome story!
I really can't wait for the next chapter! Thanks for this awesome story!
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October 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy they are gonna to get back together. Max make sure u fuck his brain out for bring stupid,fuck him for being stupid for that bitch of a girlfriend, and fuck him for all the time he wasn't around. lol Iove this story so much.