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by Paige_Turner

person Sickof-it
schedule March 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
For fucks sake why you need to continually feel the need to fuck around with an already great story is beyond me, an I honestly want to know what happens next but I'm getting really sick of reading and rereading chapters with the smallest of tweaks. Can't you focus on the actual storyline I mean honestly first theres 18 chapters then 13 then 17 an now 4 really now I mean come on thats worse then storys that get randomly abandoned atleast then I can make up an ending. Why can't you just finish the damn story so we can know what happened at the end of your damned cliff hanger and do this minor editing shit after you finish the goddamned story!
person animekid
schedule March 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
He's going to hook up with the rich guy isn't he? Here is hoping he does and drops the con job to the shock of the others.

Also the A/N made me laugh; reminds me of when my ex found my stash. He didn't mind though, since he was a pervert himself (not into that but -shrug- he was sort of understanding.)
schedule March 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
There is that story I so enjoyed!

Really thought it was gone forever, but now an opportunity to read and enjoy a third time around – LOL!

What can I say? I’m a sucker for this story.

Looking forward to the updates and getting to that crucial point all over again!

person keyboo
schedule March 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad to see this story back up! Can't wait for more!!
schedule March 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my!I see you're back again!There's a strong urge in me to fist pump in the air and scream 'IT WAS ABOUT DAMN TIME!'...But!I'm not gonna succumb to such temptations.'Cause I have more self control than that.*eye twitches from the self-restraint*

Wow...That...would've been really REALLY awkward...I can't even imagine something like that...But even if something like that did happen I guess I would stick to the safe 'What?These?Howdiditgetthere?I swear to my love for hetero canon pairings that they aren't mine!I don't even have a computer...Oh look!Thor is riding a gay unicorn!*then proceeds to run as far and away as she can,then returns a few days later with his favorite food and a big grin as if nothing ever happened*

O dear...You're going to re-write it again?Guess there's no chance in ever finding out whether Rachel would end up with Sarah or not...I've just finished re-reading it a few weeks ago and I was hopping to find out whether there would be a happy ending with three marriages at the same time or not...*sigh*Back to square one I guess...
schedule March 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
very interesting! I cant wait to read more and i bet David will end up gay in the end! lol
schedule March 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh Paige! I wondered where you ran off to! lol Wait, isn't this the second re-write? haha

Love your new name: Paige Turner, yeah, this story is definitely a page turner! Can't wait till you get back to chapter sixteen where I think you left off last time. :)