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March 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You know, I remember this chapter from last year. I probably commented the same then too: why did Max pull out when David was finished? He could have kept going and probably made David come again. Just sayin'.....
Ok, on to chapter thirteen! Just when I thought I was all caught up, I see you've posted a bunch more chapters! lol :)
Ok, on to chapter thirteen! Just when I thought I was all caught up, I see you've posted a bunch more chapters! lol :)
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March 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Just finished chapter fourteen w/Eric's renewed drunken friendship. lol I loved the banter back and forth between David and Eric. Too funny. I'm so glad they made up though. Or I should say, I'm so glad Eric forgave David. David was horrible to him in high school and he certainly deserved it if Eric didn't forgive him.
Ok, on to chapter fifteen....
Ok, on to chapter fifteen....
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March 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Dammit Paige! I'm all caught up! lol
I think I remember this chapter from last year. Is everything else new from here on out?
Oh, one thing: I think you should put the disclaimers about the songs in an A/N at the beginning of the chapter. Just list all the songs and then say that you don't own the rights to them, etc., etc. Because it's very distracting every time I read one line of a song and then the disclaimer is there, and then I read a line of ANOTHER song and then ANOTHER disclaimer is staring me in the face. It's just annoying. Just list all the songs at once at the beginning and be done with it. :)
Ok, anxiously waiting for chapter eighteen! :)
I think I remember this chapter from last year. Is everything else new from here on out?
Oh, one thing: I think you should put the disclaimers about the songs in an A/N at the beginning of the chapter. Just list all the songs and then say that you don't own the rights to them, etc., etc. Because it's very distracting every time I read one line of a song and then the disclaimer is there, and then I read a line of ANOTHER song and then ANOTHER disclaimer is staring me in the face. It's just annoying. Just list all the songs at once at the beginning and be done with it. :)
Ok, anxiously waiting for chapter eighteen! :)
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March 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I feel like a moron but I forgot (can't figure out) the ages of everyone. So I'm going to re read it again. Which is kind of cool because I don't mind doing it.
Laughing at how the dark side is consuming him! I'm still hoping things work out at the end though; nothing wrong with being gay.
And you update fast; better than most people and a hecka lot better than me.
Laughing at how the dark side is consuming him! I'm still hoping things work out at the end though; nothing wrong with being gay.
And you update fast; better than most people and a hecka lot better than me.
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March 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, that I'm really glad to see this story posted again! It's one of my favorites and I'm really interested to see how this all pans out(again). I guess I have a weakness for characters(like David) who are forced to take a good, introspective look at themselves. This rewrite is even better as you add more details to the story that help flesh out the characters and situations. Keep up the good work!
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March 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking this story. I can't wait for more. <3
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March 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Am a new reader, and wondering if the boy David bullied in high school could possibly be Max...?
Can't wait to see where you take this!
Thanks for sharing this fic!
Can't wait to see where you take this!
Thanks for sharing this fic!
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March 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Laughed for a while at the last chapter.
For some reason chapter 2 was really all weird in the format (bunched together?) I was like "Did Aff.net screw up again?"
Oh yeah...reading this at 5am. I'm laughing at how he's slowly turning gay in a delicious funny fashion (better than I thought,) and his gf is so blind to it. I don't feel sorry for the woman not at all.
How is the gay sex going to work since he's a virgin in that fashion?
For some reason chapter 2 was really all weird in the format (bunched together?) I was like "Did Aff.net screw up again?"
Oh yeah...reading this at 5am. I'm laughing at how he's slowly turning gay in a delicious funny fashion (better than I thought,) and his gf is so blind to it. I don't feel sorry for the woman not at all.
How is the gay sex going to work since he's a virgin in that fashion?
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March 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
lol i can only imagine how that conversation went. but you should never be ashamed of your gay boy obsession. it is not to be ashamed of, you should be proud of it. but i am happy you reposted this story i was really sad when i stopped seeing it on the board. i was waiting to see how he was going to tell him about what was happening. and then the story just disappeared so i made something up in my head and i finished the story for my self (lol) i hope to see it finished this time i want to know if the ending i made up in my head matches your ending at all.
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March 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
I read "Opportunities" before and loved it then, same as now ;) please continue soon as I know somewhat were this is going. And you left off at a really dramatic time:)Hurry hurry ;) and I hope your boyfriend gains a little bit more understanding, both for you (and the LGBT) and the creative process.
Best wishes
/Becky aka a fan ;)
I read "Opportunities" before and loved it then, same as now ;) please continue soon as I know somewhat were this is going. And you left off at a really dramatic time:)Hurry hurry ;) and I hope your boyfriend gains a little bit more understanding, both for you (and the LGBT) and the creative process.
Best wishes
/Becky aka a fan ;)