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I think chapter 4 is missing, would you mind remedying that? I would love to read the rest of the story, it's quite good :D

I´m sorry, but I absolutely hate the new font! I can´t read it.
Please please pretty please change it back! Or find another!

It hurts the flow and I just can´t concentrate on the story.

ah, I loved this story. I also really wanted to see what became of The Bitch Rachel. I hope she's paying her dues, ie completely and royally fucked over. Max and David 5evr, lol.

Hey! So was reading your story as you were posting it originally and I just reread it for the billionth time. Just wondering if you're going to post the epilogue soon? I know you're doing edits right now but I'm also desperate for the ending lol.

Interesting. I think I might enjoy this story nice Chapter it's drawn me in already.
CCH

Awww, Paige, what a great ending to a great story! I'm really gonna miss these two ,err, three. Now you have to find someone for Eric -it's been awhile so I don't remember if he had gotten a b/f recently...

I'm looking forward to the epilogue. :)

That was Awesome. I loved every minute of it. Rachel was horrible. I couldn't stand her at all. Victor was scary. Phil was totally annoying. Eric was. Cool and so was David. Max was my favorite character . I would totally read this again.

Hahaha lol!At first I thought it was David who you were talking about!And I was like Omygod Max turned David into a sassy gay!He's gonna start wearing form hugging hot pink floral shirts and skinny jeans with sandals! But then I realized you were talking about Erik lol!

Have you watched Eldorado?When Erik screamed I totally had the image of those two screaming like girls!And then when David looked up it totally was the part where Tulio and Chel are having fun on the floor and Tzekelkan walks in on them!Lucky god?

Noooooooo!Not the end!Though I should've guessed with all the porn you were giving us you were trying to ease the incoming blow of pain!

I really love this story! I read the first version and loved it then too.
And I hope Max'll find his balls to forgive and move on - with David hopefully.
Sure it was a shitty thing to do what David did, but he returned the money and is obviously still repenting his actions.
Well, I just want them to be happy together since there's so much feelings between them.
Thank you so much for the update! It's highly appreciated.
I'm eagerly waiting for the last chapters. With everyone else. =D

Yay!!! A sex scene in the final chapter! Me love *__* A little short chapter, yes, but I´m so happy they´re back together! But I can´t help wondering what Eric would think if he new the entire situation?
Looking forward to the epilouge :D