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May 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great fic! I'm excited to see what happens next! A suggestion I have though is to perhaps think of another word instead of 'scream' so much? When I'm reading and come across the word with the scene it's used in, it just doesn't fit right. Is your character screaming or is she moaning? Groaning? Gasping with delight? If you're using MS Word, you can highlight the word and right click for synonyms, or go to 'dictionary.com' for a thesaurus reference. (Another site I have archived is http://www.literotica.com/c/adult-how-to ).
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April 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
really enjoing this so far!thank you!
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April 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
ooh please update :)
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April 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like this ;) I'm interested to see where this is going.
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April 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Things are starting to get interesting and bad. D=
Really curious what's gonna happen next!
Really curious what's gonna happen next!
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April 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You got me hooked! I'm very interested in seeing what happens next!
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April 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This chapter had a lot of vomit. I had to prepare myself.
I kinda want to see more and how the fuck.....did this happen. Among other things.
I kinda want to see more and how the fuck.....did this happen. Among other things.
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April 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Arrgg ! Can't wait for more !
So thrilling ! Well done !
But is Six going to keep his promise and leave with his demons ?
So thrilling ! Well done !
But is Six going to keep his promise and leave with his demons ?
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April 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am really loving your story! So unexpected. . .though I am sad her friends are getting a shitty deal. Can't wait to read more!!!
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April 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Super awsome yay ahhhhhhh I might just explode with happy excited at this new chapter. When do I get more?