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June 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! Awesome story!!! I never read het but ur story is an exception!!! I'm abselutly in LOVE with this story!!!
I can't wait to read more off this! Please more soon! ;D
I can't wait to read more off this! Please more soon! ;D
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June 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I want to get on the mailing list because I missed this story.
God I couldn't even find it at first; stupid search and previews. Glad I did have patience to search this out thoroughly. Good stuff; you really are a powerful gripping writer.
Can wait to see what happens in the future.
God I couldn't even find it at first; stupid search and previews. Glad I did have patience to search this out thoroughly. Good stuff; you really are a powerful gripping writer.
Can wait to see what happens in the future.
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June 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I won't lie, i love this. I understand the fact you have exams but at the same time I hope so badly for more updates. the characters are done extremely well, the plot is interesting and I won't deny it I hope they make up at some point because you can see every emotion betweent hem and everything they are holding back. You've done an excellent job, I'm impressed Please update as quickly as you can I absolutly am addicted to this story.
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June 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! I want more!
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June 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I wonder what else he'll do to her now. And how she'll respond.
Do update soon!
Do update soon!
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May 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great update! I hope she stays really angry with him for a while and doesn't give in to him. After what Verxis just did she should be planning her escape! Can't wait for the next xhapter!
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May 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
No problem, I just thought a few were a bit repetitive and didn't seem to fit in some places. I have one of those minds when I read something, the story comes to life in my mind like a movie so when I stumble across a word that doesn't feel like it fits/sounds right in a certain area, it rings like a loud bell in my head. I reread the modification and they're placed very well. When researching for building my plethora of 'writing tips' reference folder, I found there isn't a large market for tips on writing erotic scenes, or they're small, skimpy lists. Keep up the great work, and I was glad to read your update!
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Best regards,
Aqua
Also, if you'd like to reply to reviews without using an author's note, there is a section on the AFF forums for response reviews.
Best regards,
Aqua
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May 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
yey another chapter! thank you! I relly hope she tortures him for a time :)
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May 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I totally love the story :) I hope you continue with it. I do agree with AquaTonic about the 'screams.' It just seems a little much for the scene and made me stumble a bit over it. But other then that tiny little thing, your writing is awesome!
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May 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oops sorry! I read it yesterday and noticed you changed it. Anyhow.. love it!