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Another wonderful chapter!

It would be interesting to find out who is responsible for the dying crops as well as the portal. My suspicion is Briakuol as there have been many hints of her devious nature...but on the flip side, Verxis was captured in his younger years by humans so perhaps this where the readers learn about that 'someone' that is responsible for the portal opening; and Belle learns of his past?! Or perhaps there is a link between Briakuol and the 'bad humans'?

As Belle is now in the hospital it would be interesting to know if her parents are aware of her pregnancy? I hope the hospital did not abort the child!! Moreover, as the initial 'deal' at the beginning of the story was for Verxis to never return to the human realm providing Belle gives herself in, it would then be interesting to see how he is going to get her back without breaking his end of the bargain. After all she did not choose to go back but was taken from the demon realm.

And are Rick and Dil ever going to truly forgive Belle? Would any of Verxis's minions be willing to risk helping the king get his mate back?

All speculation at this point...but definitely entices the audience to look forward to the next chapter.

WTF!?! Oh no...she has to get back to Six! He has got to be devistated...and it will have been a long time to him even if she is only in the human realm for a little bit. I did not see that coming...not at all. And did I mention how happy I am to have an update finally! I love this story so much and then BAM...nothing. please dont do that again.

This is so interesting. I totally love it. Though I have a bad feeling that either her parents want to force an abortion on her or that the gov will take an interest in her. Speaking of which what happened to the demons that did fall through the hole? Are they on Earth as well?

omg...what???

Chapter please! It turns me on that sometimes i would touch myself~

Sooo I have moved past this story for months and then 5 days ago I gave it a whirl...this is one of my favorite stories I have ever read on here. I cant wait to read more! Your writing style is amazing. You are a natural. It just flows. And your imagination is top notch. I love every detail of the demon realms. Oh! And all the sex! BONUS! I hope like hell you keep updating this story. My heart will break if I dont know how it ends! Pleeeeease keep up the amazing updates!

Oh, man. I just about DIED when I saw that you updated - because I was thinking about when you might update when the email came through. BRILLIANT, BRILLIANT, BRILLIANT! Well worth the wait. I wanted to stand up and applaud at the end of the chapter (like you do at the endow a good movie...well, maybe you do. I want to cheer, anyway)!
You definitely know where you're going with this. Even if you don't, you're damn good at pretending. We get to see Belle (or Nana, depending on who is talking to her) develop more into a leader rather than just a doting girlfriend, and begin to take risks that pay off - and it looks like Six is starting to respect her as such, rather than just his fuckable girlfriend.
Kudos. Really can't say enough, but it's late. And I've read this chapter three times. So I'll stop gushing and let you keep writing.

Ugh. Two steps forward...one step back to bed. Gross. I just got over a pretty nasty cold - and even though I'm not contagious anymore, all my coworkers keep telling me I'm carrying the plague. So I feel Belle's pain. And I'm not even pregnant at the same time. I'm still a bit baffled by how well she is able to just accept all this. It is and yet is not a change from who she was when she first met Six/when he returned. I'm still working it out in my head. I think I need to re-read this chapter when I'm not under the influence of cold medicine. Love that we're developing Six's character and backstory a bit more - can't wait for more details to be revealed. She's offering a lot to him without getting much back (other than sex, of course)...turn about is fair play. Maybe she needs to withhold sex until she gets more answers. The relationship seems very one-sided.

Keep up the awesome work! Love, chocolate biscuits, and carrots for the plot bunnies,

Emilie

Oh, yeah - and when the HELL are we going to find out who toppled the bell tower and blamed Belle? ;-)

First, I should start off by saying I really started to enjoy this book, loved the beginning. Then as soon as they went to the demon world, I started to hate it. Annabelle is literally the weakest, most useless, female lead I have ever had the displeasure of reading about. Im sorry but this is my opinion. She gave in way way WAY too easy. Yeah he is strong but no matter what he does to the body doesn't change the mind. He never once raped her, it was always consensual even though she was always like oh I hate you and then she fucks him without a care despite him killing a shit ton of humans and having a harem of women. I'm sorry but I don't think I can finish this story. You had something really good going and then you ruined it for me. I'm all for shy, innocent, female leads but Annabelle is just a straight up pussy.