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To thejackinati275...im not sure why you are being so fucking hateful buuuut pretty sure that magic as the author has mentioned in ohhhh I dont know.....every fucking chapter...would absolutely beat a modern army as you put it. Let me see...magic or guns. Thats a no brainer. And there has also been TONS of rape. You need to chill out and go read a different story. No one is making you read this. So lighten the fuck up. You big fucking meanie. This is the authors sytory and they can write it how they want. I dont know why you think its okay to be so hateful. If you dont like it just dont read it anymore. Leave a review sure but try to have an imagination when you read a fiction story. Geez.

I really really really love this story and am not unhappy with how it is going. . . As long as she gets back with Six somehow. And I would be DEVESTATED if she lost the baby, but I figure demon babies are meant to be tough and survive so I expect he will be fine, not to mention adorable. I hope you don't change things too much. Though it is a bit curious why they think they would be safe from the horrible scientists when they were clearly targeted and bad guys would know where they live? Hope you get your second wind to finish this story soon and hope you find some joyful things to bring into your life to brighten it up.

Ah. I can sympathize w the depression, tho I'd never get it diagnosed due 2 the fact it would har my career future. And FYI I'm still really n2 this fic:-). U thru me 4 a loop w the bunny tho!!! XD lmbo can't wait 2 read more! My antidepressive is finding somethin 2 laf at at least 3x a day(google helps a LOT): Confucius jokes, shaved llamas, blonde jokes, pranks, epic fails, memes, demotivational posters, ETC!!! Funformobile.com has good jokes 2
Rukia

I love this story, I can't wait to see what happens next! please upload the next chapter soon!

I adore this story. It's been very interesting watching the relationships evolve. I can't wait to see what happens next. If you have a mailing list please put me on it! xoxo Robin

WTF!... Really, you expect demons armed with fuck know's what to best the MODERN FUCKING ARMY... really!... do you think Modern arm's and equipment are for fucking show... Put your Six and his demons up against an M134d and watch as they are turned into a fine-ass mist, you think thick skin will stop 50 rounds of 7.62x51mm Nato every second... like hell!

I know that this is porn/smut but you could have at least make your demon army have modern arms... and not clubs or whatever the fuck it seems they have... in fact you should clarify what they are armed with... because the picture in my head is this... Red-skinned cavemen armed with clubs vs Modern Fucking Army armed with assault rifles and modern artillery and Aircraft!

Also, as 'PissedOffGuest' wrote previously in one of the reviews, this shit isn't even Noncon or even rape... the entire time the chick wants Six's penis even when she blurts on and shit about not wanting it, seriously you have written it wrongly and it comes off in the wrong way... now i may never have written smut before, but i feel that you could have spent more effort, as well as make Six more forceful, make him actually demand shit, he is the king and everything, Not to mention that you killed off the Humans far too quickly as well as by making Annabelle the most 'bland' character that i have read about in some months of browsing Fanfiction.net, and some of the characters and Mary/Gary-stues on that site are god-damned horrible.

Normally i tend to write my reviews (On fanfiction.net generally) as nicely as possible... but i cannot find the words to sum it up other than to say that this work needs a rewrite... Not only was this story Tame (Really there was not even something i would call rape), but i rarely even felt moved by your main character's thoughts or actions and i never connected with a one of your characters, and seeing as you made fucking cavemen win against a MODERN FUCKING ARMY!, this story has earned my ceaseless hatred as of now.

The only thing i can be content with your story was that the earlier chapters were made of a good quality, however it is such a shame that it drifted off.

Hi i really love this story and can't wait for the next chapter! I'm kinda new to aff tho and i have no idea how to follow this! Help please :)

:( This makes me so sad...

Siv! Well at least we got a few answers after the last chapter's cliffhanger. Geez. I didn't realize until now how many proverbial pins and needles I've been on since the last chapter. It wasn't all a fucking dream, and she is still pregnant, and Six is real and is freaking out, as expected. But there's mischief afoot! The "jinx" situation is coming back with a vengeance - things calmed down for a bit, but who is causing the crops to fail, the sickness, the sinkhole, and the chaos in Six's realm, and likely posing a threat to Belle/Nana's safety in her own?! Ooooh. I look forward to seeing you unravel the newest arc in the plot!

Ahhhhhh! It just keeps getting better and better! So cool how Jo helped her connect her dream with Six's! And what danger is on earth!?! It would be really cool if her dad ended up being able to help her because he is always going on about all his conspiracy theories and it just might turn out that he isnt paranoid after all...whats that saying?......Your not paranoid if someone is really after you! CREEPY! The suspense is killing me! I cant wait for another update...so pleeeeease add one soon! You are such an amazing writer...and your imagination is literally out of this world;) or should I say realm?