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person Quill
schedule April 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The story, though pretty typical, was well written. I don't know why I didn't foresee the ending from the start. I was so taken with Ruby's fascination; at first pitying her because I thought her love wasn't returned then because the guy seemed a tad unstable. I like the ending. It's nothing special except that it doesn't try to be. It's just Ruby's joy. This story makes me curious as to the other 9 Tales. I'm looking forward to an update!