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Chappy 3 read now. I'm a little confused as to why the events of the day the same for the most part. I understand the changes with the partner and the situation of how they have sex (p.e., sauna, library) But I don't understand why the classes where dismissed with tobias but they where in class with Both Marcus'. Well except the second Marcus had one class free. Just letting you know my thoughts.

I do want to state again that I'm not trying to attack you or your story. I just want to give you input and let you know what I'm thinking.

I wont give a name because I like the surprise :P. Ill be waiting for the next one.

Another good chapter. A little sad that it repeats an already used location. P.T is starting to shape up nicely. Can't wait for you next post.

I thought Nathaniel had Engineering first period, or is that also considered Pneumatics?

So this day was definitely different than the other 'loop' days. Edvin actually admitted to Nate that all the others in class wanted him. And P.T. stabbing Edvin - why didn't he hurt anyone else?

Anxiously awaiting the next update. =)

Well, I can't wait to hear how this is happening over and over again. lol

The note in Nathaniel's locker from P.T., does he know Tobias' last name? B/c I was thinking it could begin with the letter "P" and P.T. could really be T.P. lol

Ok, on to the next chapter!

Ha, this is how my perverted mind works: have all three guys with Nathan! lol ;)

So...this was an exciting chapter. The old lady in the shop, the thunderbolt, the necklace. I can't wait to read more! :)

I really like what you have going here (even though I've only read chappy 1) But there it just one thing I have to say..... Three inches is really freaken small. I mean I'm not trying to be mean it just kind of threw me. I mean most guys that I've seen (including myself) are about 7-9 inches when flaccid and only like a half inch more when up.

I do like this story though and I will continue to read... I just couldn't keep reading until after I said something about it.

Just finished chappy 2. I like that he notices that both Marcus' are fighting over him. makes me wonder if there going to get even more jealous when 3 roles around. :P ( at least I'm guessing there will be a third guy. *laughs*)

I just started reading this. I'm sorry to hear about your friend Nathaniel.

The end of the first chapter reminds me of this Disney TV movie I watched with one of my kids a few years ago. I can't remember the name of it; something with summer in the title. Actually, there was an episode of "Zack and Cody" that had the same theme, come to think of it. Cody kept repeating the same day over and over again. It got so bad that he even memorized what everyone else was going to say. I think the Disney movie was similar.

Anyway...awesome concept. On to chapter two. :)