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April 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. Have not had a chance to read the first one yet. I would love to read the hidden chapter. Keep on being creative.
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April 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter and the story so far! I can't wait to read about Edmund and Soren's reunion!
I like knowing that their dad is remorseful about his past and how he treated Brett and abandoned Edmund.
Please don't feel unmotivated! I think your writing is great and your ideas really creative. Anyway, keep up your good work :) and thanks for writing!
I like knowing that their dad is remorseful about his past and how he treated Brett and abandoned Edmund.
Please don't feel unmotivated! I think your writing is great and your ideas really creative. Anyway, keep up your good work :) and thanks for writing!
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April 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
lack of interest are u kidding me a have been patience thiking u were busy i camt wait for more i want to see soren again. and if winnnig will give him to mee ill whinnned wahhhhhh
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April 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yay finally! Edmund is soooo close to meeting Brett.
I wonder how that reunion will go.
I sincerly hope after meeting Brett they will take him to Soren who is not dead!
I hope Edmund is ok.
I wonder how that reunion will go.
I sincerly hope after meeting Brett they will take him to Soren who is not dead!
I hope Edmund is ok.
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March 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
My sweet Soren bring him back, I beg of you. Anyway i love it!!!!!
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March 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
awesome! please write more about soren and edmund's romance and add me to the mailing list! thanks!
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March 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That's what I'm talking about! Just go see Brett and never look back. Maybe after seeing him with Balin, he'll summon up the spirit to go after Soren himself.
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March 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
love it. i want to see soren again
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March 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Gah! Soren. Don't take it personal and don't give up. Why would he go and mention Br?? Talk about digging your own hole. "Oh, so it's my BROTHER he loves" and it won't help any if they ever cross paths and he realizes how much they look alike. Soren's never gonna hear the end of it. Persevere, Soren, persevere!
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March 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So much angst. Will Soren end up alone? That's the way it seemed in mobster under my bed. Oh I hope not. Can't wait for next chapter.