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schedule October 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Eep!  Oh no!  The aliens got Erin!  And I hope Soren's alright!  At least Hezpour wasn't captured. I love these stories. All the ideas are fascinating and clever. I'll have to find you online to get updates. I'm dying to see what will happen next! You've built a wonderful universe. I hope I can see more of it soon. Xoxo Robin

person Anonymous
schedule June 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
You are an amazing writer!! I absolutely love this story and I really really hope you will finish it. Please please finish this!!!!
person reader
schedule December 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love the stories. Hope to see more soon. Cried when I read this story.
My email is halfbreed-demon@hotmail.com
schedule May 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Sudden turn of events!
I hope Soren senses the danger Edmund is it and comes to save the day =)

Looking forward to your next update!
person Anon
schedule May 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Nooooo.... What happens next??? Does Erin arrive in time for Soren?? I just have to know. The thought of Erin loosing Soren is just too sad, and the poor kid has gone through so much already. I can hardly wait until you update, I really like this story.
person Anon
schedule April 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story. Can't wait to read more. Wonderfully written and very intriguing.
schedule April 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I feel bad for Edmund. Logan and Adam could have been better hosts.
I still can't wait for the meeting with Brett.
I really hope Edmund will be okay and won't die!!!!!
I want Soren to come back and than Ed could explain to him why he was hurt and why he acted the way he did when he pushed Soren out.

Well I reallyyyyyyyyyyy can't wait for the hidden chapter as well as the new chapter for this :D
person TRUgrit
schedule April 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
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schedule April 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
hi can i read your hidden chaps? please...I really like your stories...

maria_lhaine@yahoo.com
schedule April 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great story... please send me the hidden chapter. Thank you!

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