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It feels like it should be part of the main story, not a side story, especially since the ending implies something else is going on. That may just be because we haven't got very far in the main one, yet. Are you adding to this?

I love this flash fic! Imagining the Sire in a decorating spree is priceless. I thought he were the kind to be collected and stern, but this...made me see him in a different way. (And Caimus is always so cute!) I'd love to read more of these short fics. ;)

Good job with the prompts! I find this to be interesting and rather easy to fall into as an excerpt from your other story. The ending was great foreshadowing of ominous things yet to be.

I still find parenthetical asides to be highly distracting, though. Not so distracting as to shudder in horror, but distracting from the story itself.

Thanks for sharing,
Pw

I will confess to not having read the parent story, mostly due to lack of time, but I confess myself duly intrigued now.

This was a wonderful snippet, a lovely little glimpse into your world, and you make it feel very natural and approachable. The use of the prompt words was very imaginative, and I'm even more intrigued by the potential tie-in.